Template:Did you know nominations/Claudia Powers

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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 20:19, 24 February 2022 (UTC)

Claudia Powers

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... that after her father received hospice care, Connecticut state legislator Claudia Powers introduced bills to include hospice under Medicare? Source: [1]
- Reviewed: State of Hawaii Organization of Police Officers
- Comment: Claudia III in the series of claudias :)

5x expanded by Theleekycauldron (talk). Self-nominated at 08:26, 7 February 2022 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy compliance:

Adequate sourcing:
Neutral: - n
Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:
Other problems:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: Use of "noted" and "pointed out" should be avoided per MOS:SAID and MOS:EDITORIAL. It seems in-text attribution to Hartford Courant is excessive per WP:INTEXT: It is preferable not to clutter articles with information best left to the references. Interested readers can click on the ref to find out the publishing journal. The article somewhat reads as more about the Courant's coverage than Powers herself. —Bagumba (talk) 15:59, 8 February 2022 (UTC)

@Bagumba: Appreciate the speedy review! I've made some changes, take a look? theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/they) 23:49, 8 February 2022 (UTC)
Concerns addressed.—Bagumba (talk) 06:13, 13 February 2022 (UTC)