Talk:Claudia Powers

A fact from Claudia Powers appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 6 March 2022 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that after her father received hospice care, Connecticut state legislator Claudia Powers introduced bills to include hospice under Medicare?

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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 20:19, 24 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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... that after her father received hospice care, Connecticut state legislator Claudia Powers introduced bills to include hospice under Medicare? Source: [1]
- Reviewed: State of Hawaii Organization of Police Officers
- Comment: Claudia III in the series of claudias :)

5x expanded by Theleekycauldron (talk). Self-nominated at 08:26, 7 February 2022 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

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Neutral: - n
Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:
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Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: Use of "noted" and "pointed out" should be avoided per MOS:SAID and MOS:EDITORIAL. It seems in-text attribution to Hartford Courant is excessive per WP:INTEXT: It is preferable not to clutter articles with information best left to the references. Interested readers can click on the ref to find out the publishing journal. The article somewhat reads as more about the Courant's coverage than Powers herself. —Bagumba (talk) 15:59, 8 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Bagumba: Appreciate the speedy review! I've made some changes, take a look? theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/they) 23:49, 8 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Concerns addressed.—Bagumba (talk) 06:13, 13 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]