Template:Did you know nominations/Biswa Ranjan Nag

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:34, 4 June 2017 (UTC)

Biswa Ranjan Nag

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• ... that Biswa Ranjan Nag's studies on two-dimensional electron gas revealed its alloy scattering limited mobility for the first time? formulated for the first time the alloy scattering limited mobility of two-dimensional electron gas and demonstration of its temperature independence (INSA fellow profile)
  • ALT1:... that Biswa Ranjan Nag has secured two master's and two doctoral degrees in physics? Indian Institute of Science faculty profile

• Reviewed: Zombie Killers: Elephant's Graveyard
• Comment: For INSA website, please click N and select B Nag to see the details

Created by Tachs (talk). Self-nominated at 15:55, 15 April 2017 (UTC).

• Review ALT1 is boring. Original hook is incomprehensible to a lay person. And it does not help that even the source, published by the Indian Institute of Science, is written in broken English. It appears to support the original hook, but that requires a leap of faith that I lack. I apologize in advance for being critical but it is what it is.
  

IMO, ALT hooks should concentrate on the many important awards he received, or the program he inspired. The present hooks do him an injustice. He is an important scientist. The present hooks are like reducing a hook on Thomas Edison to ‘he was deaf.’

QPQ confirmed New enough, long enough, timely nominated. Earwig is clear. 7&6=thirteen (☎) 15:56, 3 June 2017 (UTC)

Suggest an alternative hook:

• • ALT2:... that Biswa Ranjan Nag has contributed to the development of a Monte Carlo method for the computation of the coefficient of velocity correlation? Proceedings of the International Conference on Computers and Devices for Communication

jojo@nthony (talk) 16:42, 3 June 2017 (UTC)

• Review ALT2 GTG. Much improved, IMO. Supported by readable WP:RS. Cheers. 7&6=thirteen (☎) 18:09, 3 June 2017 (UTC)