Template:Did you know nominations/Battle of Damme

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:55, 14 December 2018 (UTC)

Battle of Damme

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~~... that after the English navy defeated a French fleet, King Philip II had his surviving ships burnt?~~ Source:Rodger, N.A.M. (2004). The Safeguard of the Sea. London: Penguin. ISBN 978-0140297249. p. 54.
- ALT1:... that at the Battle of Damme a smaller English fleet captured 300 French ships, mostly loaded with bacon and wine? Source:Brooks, F. W. (2017) [1st pub. 1930]. "The Battle of Damme – 1213". In Rose, Susan. Medieval Ships and Warfare. London: Routledge. pp. 263–71. ISBN 978-1351918497. pp. 265-66; Chisholm, Hugh (1911b). "Damme". In Chisholm, Hugh. Encyclopædia Britannica. 7 (11th ed.). Cambridge University Press. OCLC 221022251, p. 789.

Reviewed: French submarine Aigrette (1904)

Improved to Good Article status by Gog the Mild (talk). Self-nominated at 10:16, 3 November 2018 (UTC).

ALT2... that after the English navy defeated Philip II's French fleet, he had his surviving ships burnt?

ALT1 is good, I find ALT0 a bit confusing as to whether Philip had his own ships burnt of if he had his enemies (the Frenchs') ships burnt. L293D (☎ • ✎) 12:21, 3 November 2018 (UTC)

@L293D: Hi, what do you think of ALT2? Any clearer? Gog the Mild (talk) 21:38, 9 December 2018 (UTC)

I personally prefer ALT1, but I would propose a modification to ALT2:

ALT2a... that after the English navy defeated Philip II's French fleet, Philip had his surviving ships burnt to avoid capture? L293D (☎ • ✎) 23:31, 9 December 2018 (UTC)

@L293D: Yes, that's better. Thanks. I am not sure which I prefer. I would suggest leaving both and letting the closing editor choose, if you are ok with that? Gog the Mild (talk) 23:40, 9 December 2018 (UTC)

Yes, that's good. L293D (☎ • ✎) 01:23, 10 December 2018 (UTC)