Template:Did you know nominations/Arthur Lewis Hall
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The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 15:23, 15 February 2024 (UTC)
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Arthur Lewis Hall
- ... that from 1904 to 1911 Arthur Lewis Hall covered 17,479 miles (28,130 km), mostly by foot, to map the geology of the Transvaal? Source: https://journals.co.za/doi/epdf/10.10520/AJA10120750_2088
- ALT1: ... that between 1904 and 1911 Arthur Lewis Hall mapped the geology across 16,388 square miles (42,440 km2) of the Transvaal, South Africa? Source: https://journals.co.za/doi/epdf/10.10520/AJA10120750_2088
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/August Palmisano
Created by Chaiten1 (talk). Self-nominated at 16:21, 28 January 2024 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Arthur Lewis Hall; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
Ktin (talk)Thank you so much for the very helpful comments. I have implemented the suggestions to the text. Very happy with the suggestions to round the numbers quoted in the hook.Chaiten1 (talk)
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Overall: 
Article meets eligibility criteria for newness. Is long enough and no issues with neutrality / tone. Article is well-sourced to seemingly reputable journals. No issues there. I am assuming good faith on some of those, particularly ones that I can not access. Hooks are interesting and are well sourced. Was able to access the text. Have a few notes that I have included re: the hooks. Please see. QPQ done. Earwig shows no issues. Nice and clean article. Ktin (talk) 21:22, 28 January 2024 (UTC)
Notes Below:
Hooks:
- Both hooks are interesting. Is there merit in rounding the numbers e.g. covered ~17,500 miles (~28,000 kms)?
- Can we add South Africa in the hook so folks who do not know the region know that we are talking about a province in SA?
Lede:
- Can we clarify / qualify what BIC was? i.e. in a phrase or two saying what BIC was and where it is.
- If the above is done you can separate the Royal society part into the next sentence
Body:
- In writing biographies, I have seen the sections -- Early life, Career (or alternately Works), and Personal life, be used. If you'd prefer the content can be reorganized that way
- Early life
- Please can we add the date of birth in this section as well.
- Who was Philip Lake? e.g. British geologist
- Similarly, who was W.J. Lewis? e.g. South African explorer
- Career
- I like the way you had conversions in the hook between miles and kms, consider the same in the article too. The numbers can remain precise here or rounded up / down based on your preference
- Awards can be a sub-section under career or can be the last paragraph within career section
- Selected publications
- Can you add ISBN numbers to the books, if available
- Personal life
- Please add a line or two about death. The details are available in the first link
Overall, a very nice and neat article. Well done. Please address as you deem fit. Ktin (talk) 21:33, 28 January 2024 (UTC)
@Chaiten1: Please address the above. Z1720 (talk) 23:24, 4 February 2024 (UTC)
@Chaiten1: has not addressed the concerns above, so I am marking this for closure as unsuccessful. If Chaiten1 does not edit this soon, it should be formally rejected. Z1720 (talk) 02:33, 12 February 2024 (UTC)
I have implemented all of these suggestions, as far as possible. I have rearranged the content of the article, and extended or clarified sections. Books or monographs from the 1920s - 1930s don't have ISBN numbers, but the citations are complete.Chaiten1 (talk)
