Template:Did you know nominations/Ahmad Albar, God Bless, Jockie Soerjoprajogo

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 ^talk 12:58, 25 January 2012 (UTC)

Ahmad Albar, Jockie Soerjoprajogo, God Bless (band)

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... that Ahmad Albar reportedly pulled a gun on fellow God Bless member Jockie Soerjoprajogo after the latter told him to quit drugs?

Created/expanded by Crisco 1492 (talk). Self nom at 04:14, 7 January 2012 (UTC)

Reviewed: The Doon School, List of The Firm episodes, Elias Abraham Rosenberg

Some alts (in case original is too negative):

ALT1: :... that although God Bless members Ahmad Albar and Jockie Soerjoprajogo have had a falling out, their sons still play music together?

ALT2: ... that God Bless members Ahmad Albar and Jockie Soerjoprajogo both have songs on Rolling Stones Indonesia's list of the 150 Best Indonesian Songs of All Time outside the group?

Crisco 1492 (talk) 10:07, 7 January 2012 (UTC)

References for the original hook: Yockie's side, Guitarist Ian Antono's side

All three articles are long enough and new enough, and liberally sprinkled with citations. AGF re: plagiarism; I haven't noticed any, but most of the sources are in a language I can't read. On hooks:

I refuse to consider the original hook due to its negativity regarding a living person (BLP concerns).
I like the ALT1 hook -- to the extent that I can discern what the sources say, I think it's good, so I'm happy to AGF. However, it is mentioned only in the God Bless article. IMO, the articles about Albar and Jockie should name the sons who play in the band Jibriel and indicate that they play in this band.
Another AGF on ALT2. However, I find that ALT1 is far more interesting. --Orlady (talk) 05:36, 25 January 2012 (UTC)