Talk:Zbrojovka Z 4/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: CosXZ (talk · contribs) 17:28, 19 April 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: 750h+ (talk · contribs) 06:31, 5 May 2024 (UTC)

I'll review this @CosXZ:.

Comments

CosXZ, I'm sorry but I'm going to have to fail this nomination. Prose needs shaping up. But I will leave some comments:

• The Zbrojovka Z 4, nicknamed the "Strong Four", was a small passenger car produced in 1933–1936 by the company Zbrojovka Brno. ==> The Zbrojovka Z 4, nicknamed the "Strong Four", is a small passenger car that was produced from 1933 to 1936 by the company Zbrojovka Brno.
• "A total of 2750 cars were produced in five series" inconsistency; why is it "2750" here but "2,750 somewhere else.
• "In the early 1930s, Zbrojovka Brno produced the Z 9 type, a car which sales results did not meet expectations." read that again

I recommend you take this to WP:GOCE, because it absolutely has the potential to be a Good Article. Best and best of luck, 750h+ 06:42, 5 May 2024 (UTC)

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