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Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk23:44, 26 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Created by The Squirrel Conspiracy (talk). Self-nominated at 23:31, 6 May 2020 (UTC).[reply]

  • New enough to mainspace, long enough. Each paragraph has a citation; the source checks out and is included in the right places. While it's good to go, TheSquirrelConspiracy, have you considered maybe breaking up the two big paragraphs in the body a bit? As to the wording of the hook, that's kind of a promoter's choice. Someone not familiar with competitive Smash will definitely be surprised that Japanese players haven't had as much success as a casual might think. Raymie (tc) 06:03, 7 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Oops, my ping was wrong! Yeah, per PGRU season makes sense, but it also needs to be broken up a bit. As I noted with the Tweek page, these articles quickly read rather dense because they are about tournament result after tournament result. Raymie (tc) 07:40, 7 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]