Talk:World Series of Poker Casino Employee Championship/GA1

GA Review

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GA review (see here for criteria)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
You seem to be the only one who has edited it, so stable enough for me. Seeing as you are just improving it.--WillC 05:31, 23 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
It is possible to add images to the article. Add the Andrew Cohen image found in his article.--WillC 08:16, 25 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Entire review

Will be starting the review shortly.--WillC 05:31, 23 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]

This seems to be a list, why should it be a Good Article instead of a Featured List?--WillC 05:42, 23 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I'm doing this at 4 am, so the first few comments may make no sense considering I'm bored, tired, and do not feel like heading to bed just yet.--WillC 08:16, 25 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Lead

"The Casino Employees Championship is one of only three closed tournaments at the World Series of Poker." If the WSOP is a tournament, how can this be a tournament as well? Maybe it would be better to have it as "The Casino Employees Championship is one of only three closed tournaments at the World Series of Poker gathering."
"While most of the events are open to the general public, participants in the Ladies Championship, Seniors Championship, the Casino Employees Championship must meet certain eligibility requirements." → "While most of the events are open to the general public, participants in the Ladies Championship, Seniors Championship, and the Casino Employees Championship must meet certain eligibility requirements."
Lead seems a little small. Is this the standard for all or most articles of this kind?--WillC 08:16, 25 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]