Talk:Wide Mouth Mason

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Rock music Low‑importance

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Cleanup

In many places, this article as currently written lapses into sounding like a marketing press release from the band's label ("transcends the easy labels of music media and instead lays ground for a sound that is wholly the band and best heard live"? "more than ready to take their pre-developed class act to the world stage"?) Wikipedia is an NPOV encyclopedia; vague marketing statements like this have no place here. Cleanup, please. Bearcat 17:48, 18 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]

agreed

Very true... sounds like one of the band members wrote it. Also sounds like a lot of hyperbole! tilde tilde tilde tilde —Preceding unsigned comment added by Grinwell76 (talk • contribs) 18:51, 28 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

It's fixed now. Better? 216.174.143.68 (talk) —Preceding comment was added at 00:06, 24 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I did some more re-writing/editing, but I'm wondering if it needs an unreferenced tag? P.J. Casey (talk) 02:10, 9 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]