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Nominator: IanTEB (talk · contribs) 10:11, 20 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:00, 1 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]


  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a. (reference section):
    b. (citations to reliable sources):
    c. (OR):
    d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a. (major aspects):
    b. (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
    b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/fail:

(Criteria marked are unassessed)

I will go through this completely today! --K. Peake 07:00, 1 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Infobox looks good!
  • "It is the album's sole" → "The song is the album's sole"
 Done
  • "listeners dance freely." → "listeners to dance freely."
 Done
  • "It peaked at" → ""Week End" peaked at"
 Done
  • Lowercase gold
 Done
Changed to Billboard Japan
Not done per WP:NOTBROKEN

Background and release

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  • "in difference to" → "in contrast to"
 Done
  • "on November 27," → "on November 27, 2015"
 Done
  • "with a similar to" → "with a similar visual to"
 Done

Composition

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  • Where is the upbeat part sourced?
 Removed
 Done
I'd consider the first NOTBROKEN but the second is done
  • Is "chaotic freedom" really correct when the source says liberation?
I've reworked the text to only put "true" in quotation. Freedom I'd argue is fine as paraphrasing

Critical reception

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  • Merge with the below section and retitle to Reception
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I don't really see what difference this would make. The Kulture says it reminds of the Michael Jackson Off the Wall age.
  • Remove or replace Liveland since this does not have any evidence of a proper editorial team
 Done

Commercial performance

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  • Make this the second para of the above section
  • "It rose to number 48," → "It rose to numbers 48," also shouldn't you cite a history for the chart at large since this is multiple weeks?
Annoyingly, Billboard Japan doesn't provide chart history via a single page. I've added multiple sources into the citation; it's a little unusual but I hope it gets the job done.
  • Lowercase gold
 Done

Live performances

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NOTBROKEN
  • Change insitgated → instigated
 Done
  • ""Week End" alongside Mark Ronson on" → ""Week End", alongside Ronson on"
I think the lack of a comma better emphasizes Ronson, which is the main point of the sentece. Unless you have another opinion?

Personnel

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NOTBROKEN

Charts

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  • These needn't be sortable~
 Done

Certifications

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  • Good

Release history

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 Both done

References

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  • Remove or replace ref 18 since there is no evidence of reliability
  • Rest looks good!
 Done

Final comments and verdict

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@Kyle Peake: I think I've fixed everything up. Since I removed Liveland, I also changed the wording about reception in the lead since there's now only one source calling it representative of Yellow Dancer. Additonally, I added a performance of the song Hoshino gave for Mark Ronson's Love Lockdown: Video Mixtape. IanTEB (talk) 16:32, 1 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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