Talk:Week End (Gen Hoshino song)

GA Review

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Nominator: IanTEB (talk · contribs) 10:11, 20 April 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:00, 1 August 2024 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):

   b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a. (reference section):

   b. (citations to reliable sources):

   c. (OR):

   d. (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a. (major aspects):

   b. (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):

   b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/fail:

(Criteria marked are unassessed)

I will go through this completely today! --K. Peake 07:00, 1 August 2024 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Infobox looks good!
• "It is the album's sole" → "The song is the album's sole"

 Done

• "listeners dance freely." → "listeners to dance freely."

 Done

• "It peaked at" → ""Week End" peaked at"

 Done

• Lowercase gold

 Done

• Pipe Billboard to Billboard (magazine)

Changed to Billboard Japan

• Pipe Yellow Voyage to Live Tour: Yellow Voyage

Not done per WP:NOTBROKEN

Background and release

• "in difference to" → "in contrast to"

 Done

• "on November 27," → "on November 27, 2015"

 Done

• "with a similar to" → "with a similar visual to"

 Done

Composition

• Where is the upbeat part sourced?

 Removed

• Pipe Wurlitzer piano to Wurlitzer electronic piano
  • Not done per WP:NOTBROKEN
• Pipe mastering engineer to Mastering (audio)
  • Also NOTBROKEN
• ""Week End" is a" → "Musically, "Week End" is a"

 Done

• Pipe black music to Music of the Africa diaspora and shouldn't R&B be piped to Contemporary R&B?´

I'd consider the first NOTBROKEN but the second is done

• Is "chaotic freedom" really correct when the source says liberation?

I've reworked the text to only put "true" in quotation. Freedom I'd argue is fine as paraphrasing

Critical reception

• Merge with the below section and retitle to Reception

 Done

• Img looks good!
• "to Off the Wall (1979) era Michael Jackson" should be re-worded to something like "to Michael Jackson's material at the time of Off the Wall in 1979"

I don't really see what difference this would make. The Kulture says it reminds of the Michael Jackson Off the Wall age.

• Remove or replace Liveland since this does not have any evidence of a proper editorial team

 Done

Commercial performance

• Make this the second para of the above section
• "It rose to number 48," → "It rose to numbers 48," also shouldn't you cite a history for the chart at large since this is multiple weeks?

Annoyingly, Billboard Japan doesn't provide chart history via a single page. I've added multiple sources into the citation; it's a little unusual but I hope it gets the job done.

• Lowercase gold

 Done

Live performances

• Pipe Continues to Live Tour: Continues

NOTBROKEN

• Change insitgated → instigated

 Done

• ""Week End" alongside Mark Ronson on" → ""Week End", alongside Ronson on"

I think the lack of a comma better emphasizes Ronson, which is the main point of the sentece. Unless you have another opinion?

Personnel

• Pipe Wurlitzer piano to Wurlitzer electronic piano
• Pipe mastering engineer to Mastering (audio)

NOTBROKEN

Charts

• These needn't be sortable~

 Done

Certifications

• Good

Release history

• None of this should be sortable
• Pipe radio airplay to Radio broadcasting

 Both done

References

• Remove or replace ref 18 since there is no evidence of reliability
• Rest looks good!

 Done

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until all of the issues are fixed; this looks solid only some issues to fix to be honest! --K. Peake 15:30, 1 August 2024 (UTC)

@Kyle Peake: I think I've fixed everything up. Since I removed Liveland, I also changed the wording about reception in the lead since there's now only one source calling it representative of Yellow Dancer. Additonally, I added a performance of the song Hoshino gave for Mark Ronson's Love Lockdown: Video Mixtape. IanTEB (talk) 16:32, 1 August 2024 (UTC)

• ✓ Pass now, I did only some brief copy editing but this was fast! --K. Peake 20:44, 1 August 2024 (UTC)