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GA Review

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Hello. I'll be doing the GA review for this article. Here are some suggestions for improvements:

  • The image in the infobox needs a detailed Non-free use rationale.
  • In "Cancellation and future", the FBI concept is mentioned before it is explained. A reader who does not already have knowledge of the concept might be confused by that.
  • Shouldn't Lilly be mentioned in the "Cast and characters"? You could extend the second sentence like so: "Kristen Bell portrayed the titular Veronica Mars, a high school junior and skilled private detective trying to solve the mystery of her murdered best friend Lilly Kane"...or something to that effect. That would make the next sentence make sense, too. Duncan is mentioned as Lilly's brother without informing the reader of who she is.
    • Actually, a better solution would be to move "Season synopses" to before "Production". Then everything is fully explained right off the bat.

Overall, this is a very well done article. Great work! The article will be on hold for seven days to allow for improvements. Nikki311 02:02, 8 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]