Talk:Typhoon Holly (1984)

Typhoon Holly (1984) has been listed as one of the Natural sciences good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: May 10, 2020. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review

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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 23:41, 8 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.

a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: pass
Pass/Fail:

Review

Lead

form, did you mean from?
- Done. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 03:37, 10 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Can tropical depression be wikilinked?
- Sure. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 03:37, 10 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Meteorological history

While Tropical Storm Gerald was forming in the South China Sea,the Western Pacific..., please make a space after the comma
- Fixed. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 03:37, 10 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
A large storm, Holly slowly deepened, oddly worded
- Better? Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 03:37, 10 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

References

Reference 16 is freely available here. Is it possible to still attach the URL?
- Sure. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 03:37, 10 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Reference 10 is freely available here. Is it possible to still attach the URL?
- Not free :P YE ^Pacific ^Hurricane 03:37, 10 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  - Oh sorry, only the first paragraph was. Linking it might still be useful for those with subscriptions/Wikipedia has ways of accessing such resources. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 04:07, 10 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    - IIRC, the – via Lexis Nexis (subscription required) is suppose to cover the issue with accessibility bit. I'd argue adding a url with an accessdate from a paywall would technically be inaccurate since that's not how I personally accessed it. YE ^Pacific ^Hurricane 04:53, 10 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      - Yellow Evan, Alright, that's fair. I'm passing this article HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 13:23, 10 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]