Talk:Typhoon Ewiniar (2024)/GA1
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Nominator: HurricaneEdgar (talk · contribs) 00:02, 1 September 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Riley1012 (talk · contribs) 21:39, 11 October 2024 (UTC)
Hello! I will complete a review of this article within one week. -Riley1012 (talk) 21:39, 11 October 2024 (UTC)
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1. Well-written
- Strong winds and flooding caused power outages and disruptions of transport,... The wording here is awkward- change to "transportation disruptions"
- ...with eleven domestic flights and one international flights affected. change to "one international flight"
- In Bicol, four people were injured and almost 6,000 people were stranded in ports... Add a comma after the word injured.
- After Ewiniar left the Philippines, Lucena, Quezon was declared in a state of calamity. Add a comma after Quezon
The issue has been addressed. HurricaneEdgar 09:31, 16 October 2024 (UTC)
2. Verifiable
Passes Earwig. No concerns with the reliability of the sources (they are all government sources or reliable news agencies).
- Spot check: 1, 4, 10, 15, 29, 34, 42, 45, 51, 55, 64, 72, 73, 78- no issues.
- By 18:00 UTC that same day, Ewiniar had intensified into a typhoon, marking it as the first typhoon of the 2024 Pacific typhoon season;... Ref 22 does not support the claim that this was the first typhoon of the season.
- Ref. 43 appears to be down and needs an archived link
Doing... HurricaneEdgar 14:00, 16 October 2024 (UTC)
3. Broad
This article covers all the information you would expect a tropical cyclone article to cover.
4. Neutral
No concerns here.
5. Stable
- I noticed in the last few days there's been a dispute on whether or not to include the year in the short description, has this been resolved?
- The edit war was resolved when the user apologized Please see their talk page. HurricaneEdgar 09:36, 16 October 2024 (UTC)
6. Illustrated
The images used have proper licensing and are relevant.
- One question, the image in the Preparations section gives the name Tropical Depression Aghon, but the other images use Ewiniar even when the storm was near/in the Philippines. Would it make more sense to call in Ewiniar in all the image captions?
- At that time, the storm was not named Ewiniar by the JMA; instead, PAGASA assigned it the local name Aghon, which should be retained. HurricaneEdgar 09:30, 16 October 2024 (UTC)
@HurricaneEdgar: Okay, that is all I have. -Riley1012 (talk) 15:45, 15 October 2024 (UTC)