Talk:Tropical Storm Warren (1984)

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Review: June 19, 2018. (Reviewed version).

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Did you know... that in 1984, Tropical Storm Warren destroyed 740 homes across the Philippines?

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 03:37, 19 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 03:37, 19 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

"After killing 17 while crossing the archipelago," As a disturbance?
- Should be pretty clear it was a disturbance already given that end of the sentence and the previous sentence. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

"attaining peak strength." At?
- I tend to avoid the JTWC/JMA bullshit in the lead. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Who issued the TCFA?
- It's already mentioned in the wikilink for TCFA so while I sometimes mention it was issued by the JTWC, I don't think it should be something that is required. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]
JTWC abbreviation needed.
- Done. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]
"monsoonal sure of moisture"
- Fixed. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]
"afternoon November 2" Missing a word.
- Added a word. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]
"Offshore Marinduque Island," Here too.
- That's fine unless I'm missing something? I use "Offshore X," all the time and it's never been brought up before. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Probably best to replace Aurora with a red link than what it is right now.
- Even better, I replaced it with an actual blue link. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]
"Additionally, twelve other people died due landslides." Add "elsewhere".
- Sure. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Assuming no Vietnamese impact.
- Vietnam is to TC info as oil is to water. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

That's it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 03:54, 19 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review man. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 19:56, 19 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]