Talk:Tropical Storm Axel (1992)

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Review: August 31, 2024. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review

Passed. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 01:47, 31 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

This review is transcluded from Talk:Tropical Storm Axel (1992)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: OhHaiMark (talk · contribs) 17:15, 28 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: TheNuggeteer (talk · contribs) 08:47, 30 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewing this :) 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 08:47, 30 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

Intensifying at an abnormally low latitude, change comma to period, capitalize the next letter.
This was as it passed needs ce, maybe remove the former period and uncapitalize the first letter, and you can say 'as it passed'. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 09:29, 30 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Meteorological history

both areas of convection began consolidating Remove 'began' to fit it well.
Can't see that source 2 stated that a warning by the JTWC called the TD 'O1W'.
Source 2 does not mention January 6 (probably)?
causing the former agency You mean 'latter'?
later that day, the JTWC I don't think 'later that day' is necessary. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 09:29, 30 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
For your third point, if you see the map at page 44 of the JTWC report, it shows that Axel developed into a tropical storm on 6 January, and for your fourth point, the JMA didn't start naming storms until 2000. OhHaiMark (talk) 16:42, 30 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Preparations and impact

and debris onto the island’s runway What type of runway? An airport?

Other comments

The article is massively short, and the storm does not seem significant, is there an explanation to this?
Going to assume that every mention of ref 3 is accurate, since I don't know how to read it. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 09:29, 30 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
For your first point, I'd argue that Axel was significant as it caused over $1 million in damage and wreaked havoc on the islands. OhHaiMark (talk) 16:46, 30 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

My review! Hopefully you can answer these comments. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 09:29, 30 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The second problem for MH needs to be addressed. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 01:05, 31 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Everything looks good now! 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 01:46, 31 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.