Talk:Tinkaton/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cukie Gherkin (talk · contribs) 02:25, 2 August 2023 (UTC)

Lead

1. Inconsistent description of hair with the body of the article; calls them pigtails in the lead, but ponytails in the body. Also, does it have either? To me, it seems like she just let her hair down.
   1. Should be fixed.
2. Inconsistent pronoun use; uses they/them/their/theirs at some points, she/her/hers at others, and it/its at others
   1. Fixed. I did leave the one instance of her in regards to Unite's commentary, as it's a singular Tinkaton. Can't do anything about the other quotes that use she or its sadly.

Infobox

1. Not related, but god it'd be neat if there was a way to say "Pokemon species" instead of character so we could remove a field.
   1. Yeah that may be worthwhile to bring up to the infobox page, had something else I wanted to mention there.

Appearances

1. Is the description of "toddler" mentioned in RS or primary sources?
   1. Removed it.
2. Taxi shouldn't be in quotes, as it's an understandable word and accurately depicts a taxi service
   1. Fixed

Reception

1. Is there no commentary to do with the mismatch between Corviknight and Tinkaton in gameplay?
   1. Sadly the only discussions about their matchup were in GameRant and Screenrant

Images

1. All good.

Sources

Still need to do this.

All good. :v - Cukie Gherkin (talk) 03:09, 2 August 2023 (UTC)