Talk:Tianyi Ge

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Wiki Education assignment: Writing Workshop

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 3 September 2024 and 12 December 2024. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Jiani hong, Abby1123 (article contribs).

— Assignment last updated by Nymaker (talk) 21:10, 5 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Because we found that the content of this article is really a little little, even if there is no content written very detailed, so we made some additions. First our original sentence is“ The Qianlong Emperor of the Qing dynasty visited Tianyi Ge, and ordered officials to draw schematics of Tianyi Ge's building plan and book cases as prototype to build several imperial libraries including Wenyuan Ge in the Forbidden City and Wenjin Ge in the Chengde Mountain Resort to house the Complete Library of the Four Treasuries encyclopedia.” In the new sentence, the structure and wording are adjusted and the sentence is more clear and clear. The sentence is also split into two parts, so that the information is more accurate and logical, and the sentence is more in line with the English context, jumping out of the Chinese context.

The other is that"The Qianlong Emperor of the Qing dynasty visited Tianyi Ge and instructed officials to create schematics of its building plans and bookcases as a prototype. These plans were then used to construct several imperial libraries, including Wenyuan Ge in the Forbidden City and Wenjin Ge in the Chengde Mountain Resort, which would house the Complete Library of the Four Treasuries encyclopedia."The new version of this sentence supplements the background of the establishment, details the background information, describes the year when Tianyi Pavilion was established, adds the position of the founder, so that readers can understand more clearly. It also enriches the functions and influences of the library. First of all, the description of the functions of Tianyi Pavilion hamster at home points out that "a large number of precious books and classic works are collected", and mentions the influence on the construction of the library of its descendants. The number of books has become more accurate and the modern volume of books is mentioned, so that readers can also understand the modern situation.

I will add some sub-titles in the article and reorder the different parts of the article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by LycheeCookies777 (talk • contribs) 03:10, 14 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]