Talk:The Leader (web series)
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 12:52, 24 March 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 12:52, 24 March 2021 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
[edit]- Improve the non-free use rationale for the poster with this template.
- The infobox itself, on the other hand, appears to be missing several parameters, such as "language" and "voices".
- Added "language" (although I didn't do it before since its quite redundant); and I don't have the information on the voice actors to include it (no sources provide as far as I can tell). Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
- The word "intellectual" doesn't seem neutral. Try describing who Karl Marx was instead.
- Changed for "philosopher". Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
- Add a serial comma after "propagandism".
Plot
[edit]- Again, change "intellectual" per WP:NPOV.
- The phrase "and leaving of" sounds off as it splits the sentence. Try rewording.
- Paraphrased. Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
- Remove the comma after "with his death".
Production
[edit]- "merchandisesuch" → "merchandise such"
- Add a serial comma after "stage plays".
- I don't think "sinonizated" is an actual word.
- True. Reworded as "went through a sinicization". Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
Broadcast
[edit]- "social-media" → "social media"
- "more-serious" → "more serious"
- Is there a word missing between "about political economy"?
- No. Is it sounding strange to you? The article by Engels that Marx reads is about political economy. Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
- A little bit, yes, but no worries as it's still readable. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 13:37, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
- "surplus value" → "surplus-value"
- Not usually hyphenated. The article surplus value writes it this way. Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
- Add a serial comma after "boils".
- Add a serial comma after "Austrian, Prussian".
- All summaries are under 200 words, so they pass MOS:TVPLOT.
Reception
[edit]- In the text and in the reference by her, change "Millingan" to "Milligan".
- Wow, nice catch. Thanks.
Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
- Wow, nice catch. Thanks.
- Similar issue, but change "Fanzoni" to "Fantoni"
- Thanks again.
Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
- Thanks again.
References
[edit]- Archive all archivable sources (either manually or with this tool).
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