Talk:The Jaws of Life (Pierce the Veil album)

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Tour focus

I think the tour listings are getting away from the point of this article, which is about the album, so I have been bold and removed it. Mentions of tours are fine, but having four subsections on mini-tours Pierce the Veil have done/will embark on across 2022 and 2023 was bogging this article down with tangential information. @Notsammyray: I notice you've created multiple separate tour pages for other artists so as to remove the tour information from the parent album, and even stated on one of them "this page should just about the album itself". That should apply here too, so please consider making an article for Pierce the Veil's tours if you want it on Wikipedia. It accounted for literally half of the article's size, which was way too much focus on the tours. Ss112 03:32, 2 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I was going to make a major change to the List of Pierce the Veil concert tours article to fulfil this purpose, but it is not ready to be published yet, so I was just going to keep these here until I've finished it. :) Notsammyray (talk) 03:38, 2 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]