Talk:Tennena Cone/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Volcanoguy (talk · contribs) 16:58, 9 July 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Crisco 1492 (talk · contribs) 15:10, 27 December 2024 (UTC)

I'll take this review. Please note that I may bring up subjects that are not specifically GA criteria. I will identify these explicitly when mentioning them, and they will not affect a pass or fail decision. These are intended to help you further refine the article, perhaps with the goal of taking it to FAC. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 15:10, 27 December 2024 (UTC)

Image review

• File:Tennena Cone.jpg - License checks out
• File:Mt. Edziza - 4037245997.jpg - License checks out
• File:Mt. Edziza - 4037996194.jpg - License checks out
• For the alt text and captions, mind that items that are not full sentences should not have periods (i.e., A black cone-shaped mountain rising over glacial ice and three climbers in the foreground)

  Done. Volcanoguy 15:57, 27 December 2024 (UTC)

Prose

• The cone is almost completely surrounded by glacial ice of Mount Edziza's ice cap - "the glacial ice", maybe?
• alkali basalt pillow lavas, tuff breccias and lapilli - This goes against WP:SEAOFBLUE

  WP:SEAOFBLUE claims when possible, do not place links next to each other, to avoid appearing like a single link; it's not always possible to avoid two links placed next to each other. Volcanoguy 16:05, 27 December 2024 (UTC)

• The name of the volcanic cone was adopted 2 January 1980 on the National Topographic System map 104G/10 - "Adopted on", maybe?

  I'm not sure, the source claims "Adopted 2 January 1980 on 194G, as submitted by Geological Survey of Canada." Volcanoguy 15:51, 27 December 2024 (UTC)

• Cassiar Land District of northwestern British Columbia, Canada, - "the Cassiar Land District of northwestern British Columbia, Canada," perhaps (applies to both)

  I don't think so. Volcanoguy 16:06, 27 December 2024 (UTC)

• Its northern, eastern and southern flanks are mantled by the roughly 70-square-kilometre (27-square-mile) Mount Edziza ice cap and rises about 150 metres (490 feet) - Your subject was "flanks", so "rise" would be the correct verb.

  Done. Volcanoguy 15:48, 27 December 2024 (UTC)

• bedded tuff breccia - Sea of blue again

  See above. Volcanoguy 16:05, 27 December 2024 (UTC)

• Pleistocene tristanite, trachyte - More sea of blue

  See above. Volcanoguy 16:05, 27 December 2024 (UTC)

Source review

• 2a - Supported
• 2d - Supported
• 2h - Supported
• 26 - Supported
• 51 - Supported
• Earwig shows no issues.

Conclusion

• Overall, article is in excellent shape. Just a few nipicks. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 15:10, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
  • Alright, that's all of my questions addressed. Happy to say that this meets the GA criteria. Congratulations. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 16:33, 27 December 2024 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.