Talk:Suiattle River/GA1

GA Review

Passed. ♠PMC♠ (talk) 05:20, 31 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: Generalissima (talk · contribs) 23:29, 29 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Premeditated Chaos (talk · contribs) 00:34, 30 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Dibs. ♠PMC♠ (talk) 00:34, 30 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Lead's a little scant
Link Snohomish County?
Two successive sentences open with "here" and "from here" under "Course". Could reword around to reduce repetition
"sees most rain" - " sees the most rain" I think
" Above 3500 ft" missed one cvt template here
"A future lahar..." this sentence feels out of place in the middle of the rest, which are bout past lahars. I might move it to the end and reword it a bit accordingly
"the initial bridge" - not sure initial is the right word here. Original maybe, or first.
Btw, any details about when the Skyline Bridge was built?

Generally this looks good to me, above notes are suggestions, nothing that impacts the GACR in them. Images are lovely, really great selection. Sourcing is good, spot checks on available sources showed no concerns. No POV, CV, etc. Good to go, nice work! ♠PMC♠ (talk) 05:19, 31 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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