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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Suiattle River/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Generalissima (talk · contribs) 23:29, 29 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Premeditated Chaos (talk · contribs) 00:34, 30 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Dibs. ♠PMC(talk) 00:34, 30 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

  • Lead's a little scant
  • Link Snohomish County?
  • Two successive sentences open with "here" and "from here" under "Course". Could reword around to reduce repetition
  • "sees most rain" - " sees the most rain" I think
  • " Above 3500 ft" missed one cvt template here
  • "A future lahar..." this sentence feels out of place in the middle of the rest, which are bout past lahars. I might move it to the end and reword it a bit accordingly
  • "the initial bridge" - not sure initial is the right word here. Original maybe, or first.
  • Btw, any details about when the Skyline Bridge was built?

Generally this looks good to me, above notes are suggestions, nothing that impacts the GACR in them. Images are lovely, really great selection. Sourcing is good, spot checks on available sources showed no concerns. No POV, CV, etc. Good to go, nice work! ♠PMC(talk) 05:19, 31 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Did you know nomination

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Promoted to Good Article by Generalissima (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 78 past nominations.

Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 01:31, 4 September 2024 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Overall, I think this is pretty good! Although I feel like the hook could be a teensy bit more interesting, I'll let that pass because it is still something that sounds cool. The source is a-okay (and mentions it, the most important part), as well as date of the GA promotion and length of the article itself. No image, so no issues there, sources in the article itself are good, neutrality checks off, and while Earwig did find a ~27% copyvio likeliness, that's still pretty low. QPQ is done, so everything checks off! (Good luck on that Francis Bacon source!) Sir MemeGod :D (talk - contribs - created articles) 18:52, 5 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]