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A fact from Storm Poly appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 1 February 2024 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that Storm Poly caused hundreds to be stranded at Amsterdam's central station as it passed the nation?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2024/February. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Storm Poly.

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by DirtyHarry991 talk 10:35, 27 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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... that Storm Poly caused hundreds to be stranded at the Amsterdam's central station as it passed the nation? Source: ^[1]
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Created by Flux55 (talk). Self-nominated at 12:28, 17 January 2024 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Storm Poly; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.[reply]

This article is just about new and long enough. The hook is cited and interesting enough. AGF on the Dutch sources. Three minor things though: 1) please add the article to a few categories if possible 2) "... as it passed through the nation" feels superfluous. 3) Awaiting QPQ. Best, KINGofLETTUCE 👑 🥬 00:28, 19 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Ok. How about this? ... that since Storm Poly caused several rail services to be cancelled, hundreds were stranded at the Amsterdam's central station? Source: ^[1] Also, this is my first DYK nomination so I don't think I need to do a QPQ. "Flux55"

Ok, thanks for letting me know. The alt sounds good to me! Cheers, KINGofLETTUCE 👑 🥬 12:26, 19 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

- Is there anything else I need to do to improve the hook. If not, should the discussion be closed? "Flux55" — Preceding undated comment added 17:36, 19 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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^ ^a ^b "Two dead as strongest summer storm blasts Netherlands, Germany". phys.org. Retrieved 2024-01-15.

"toppled down"?

Under the section on Poly's effect on Germany is this: " ... while powerful gusts toppled down trees, ... " The Concise Oxford Dictionary defines "topple" as "Cause to fall headlong ... "; since falling is always down, I suggest that "toppled down" should be simply "toppled". What do others think? Prisoner of Zenda (talk) 07:52, 1 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for that info! I'll change it now. ''Flux55'' (talk) 12:14, 1 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

[:1-1] "Two dead as strongest summer storm blasts Netherlands, Germany". phys.org. Retrieved 2024-01-15.

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