Talk:St John of God Health Choices

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Part of an edit requested by an editor with a conflict of interest has been implemented.

Update reference to St John of God Health Care to read: St John of God Health Care is one of the largest Catholic providers of health care services in Australia.^[1]
Can you please change all instances of the name of this service to St John of God Healthcare at Home.^[2]

AnneGartner (talk) 08:55, 5 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Please provide an independent source for "one of the largest Catholic providers of health care services in Australia". Mitch Ames (talk) 12:05, 5 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hi AnneGartner. Thank you for your suggestions. I am declining the first edit request for two reasons. First, I agree with Mitch Ames that you must provide an independent source. Second, labeling a hospital network the "largest" is vague and ambiguous. St John could be the largest by hospital beds, by expenditures, or by number of doctors; but the point is, Wikipedia articles should avoid using vaguely positive terms when more specific descriptions would do better.

As for the second edit request, I reiterate my concerns with using brand names in articles (see the discussion at Talk:St John of God Berwick Hospital). Best, Altamel (talk) 19:18, 5 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Talk page watchers, please see a relevant discussion at WP:COIN. Altamel (talk) 19:18, 5 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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[2] ttps://sjog.org.au/athome. {{cite web}}: Missing or empty |title= (help)

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