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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:58, 29 August 2010 (UTC) GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria[reply]

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:
    B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
    The McAlister reference needs its capitalization fixed and a place of publication provided. Where was Sorrells published?
Fixed.--William S. Saturn (talk) 05:04, 29 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  1. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
    C. No original research:
  2. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    The sentence about the Karankawa Indians defending the settlers is out of sequence chronologically.
Removed. Not essential to the bay.--William S. Saturn (talk) 05:04, 29 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  1. B. Focused:
    The Union bombardment did more than just stall Lamar's development. Describe what actually happened. Don't think that the Reserve at St. Charles Bay is notable.
Added more detail.--William S. Saturn (talk) 05:04, 29 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  1. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  2. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  3. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
    Needs a map, badly. In fact a map is essential.
Will add a map shortly.--William S. Saturn (talk) 05:04, 29 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Map added.--William S. Saturn (talk) 07:33, 29 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  1. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:
Thank you for the review on such short notice.--William S. Saturn (talk) 05:04, 29 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]