Talk:Skyline Restaurant/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Etriusus (talk · contribs) 05:13, 18 August 2023 (UTC)

Grabbing this. Always a pleasure to review your articles. Will have notes out tomorrow, assuming my computer doesn't break again. 🏵️Etrius ( Us) 05:13, 18 August 2023 (UTC)

Thanks! ---Another Believer _(Talk) 12:55, 18 August 2023 (UTC)

Images

• All the images provided by the nominator, rights are in order.
• You have three exterior shots of the restaurant. This is a little much, and doesn't really add much to the article or anyone's understanding. Remove either 'File:Skyline Restaurant, 2021 11.jpg' or 'File:Skyline Restaurant, 2021 05.jpg'.
  •  Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 13:31, 19 August 2023 (UTC)
• Minor MOS:SANDWICH issue.
  • Still an issue with the image removed? ---Another Believer _(Talk) 13:32, 19 August 2023 (UTC)
• Love to see ALT text
  • ---Another Believer _(Talk) 13:32, 19 August 2023 (UTC)

Copy-vios

• Earwig only flags quotes
  • ---Another Believer _(Talk) 13:32, 19 August 2023 (UTC)
• Nothing on spot-checks
  • ---Another Believer _(Talk) 13:32, 19 August 2023 (UTC)

Sources

• No immediate concerns about reliability, not particularly thrilled about so many review articles
  • ---Another Believer _(Talk) 13:33, 19 August 2023 (UTC)
• All links either live or archived
  • ---Another Believer _(Talk) 13:33, 19 August 2023 (UTC)

Misc

• Dead external link: Skyline Burgers at Zomato
  • Removed. ---Another Believer _(Talk) 13:33, 19 August 2023 (UTC)
• Thrillist and Food Network, remove
  •  Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 13:33, 19 August 2023 (UTC)
• Page is stable
  • ---Another Believer _(Talk) 13:33, 19 August 2023 (UTC)
• Nominator is majority author
  • ---Another Believer _(Talk) 13:33, 19 August 2023 (UTC)

Prose

• MOS:CITELEAD
  •  Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 13:48, 19 August 2023 (UTC)
• Lead is very short, expand It
  •  Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 13:48, 19 August 2023 (UTC)
• WP:QUOTEFARM, the Description section has too many quotes
• "The Oregonian said Sky Two was "recently closed", as of August 1986." Is this quote necessary?
  •  Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 13:48, 19 August 2023 (UTC)
• Heather Arndt Anderson said Skyline's burgers and shakes "are a testament to the utter pointlessness of reinventing the wheel"

-What does this quote mean?

Reinventing the wheel, suggesting she thinks the burgers and shakes are optimal. ---Another Believer _(Talk) 13:48, 19 August 2023 (UTC)

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Comment: Not that many discrete issues, but a few systemic ones. Page suffers from WP:PROMOTION to the point of reading like an advertisement and WP:QUOTEFARM. While I understand that the Reception section can have a bunch of quotes, the Description and History section suffer from overuse. I also made a few grammatical CEs, please review when able. Placing on hold for now. 🏵️Etrius ( Us) 04:38, 19 August 2023 (UTC)

@Etriusus I've tried addressing your concerns. Please let me know if you think more is necessary for GA status. Thank you for reviewing! --Another Believer _(Talk) 14:01, 19 August 2023 (UTC)

Thanks for being patient, had some stuff in my personal life to take care of. I made some last-minute changes that I can see you've already acknowledged. All-in-all, thank you for making this an easy review, congrats on yet another GA!!! 🏵️Etrius ( Us) 02:01, 21 August 2023 (UTC)

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

🏵️Etrius ( Us) 02:01, 21 August 2023 (UTC)

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