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Reviewer: Crisco 1492 (talk · contribs) 00:27, 10 August 2012 (UTC) I'll take this... and it's a speedy fail for stability issues (edit war ongoing as I type).
A couple comments for next time:
- Several references are dead and need to be fixed. Others, like Hantu Bloggers and About.com, are not reliable. I question the reliance on newspaper articles when Singapore has had dozens, if not hundreds, of English-language books published on it (I could stop by Periplus and find a whole rack full, probably).
- The article needs a thorough copyedit (no logical reason for southeast Asia to be spelled southeast asia, for example)
- I strongly suggest the next GAN be made by an editor who has worked extensively on the article
- Good luck! — Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:27, 10 August 2012 (UTC)
- Also, compare the FAs on Nauru and Indonesia. Singapore's article is already longer than any of these and may need to be trimmed. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:46, 10 August 2012 (UTC)