Talk:Saverne Tunnel
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Saverne Tunnel has been listed as one of the Engineering and technology good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: May 23, 2016. (Reviewed version). |
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 02:32, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
Infobox
[edit]- Feel free to remove any of the following unused parameters in the infobox, not unless they will be used for verifiable and cited information:
- "other name"
- "os grid ref"
- "start"
- "end"
- "closed"
- "hielevation"
- "lowelevation"
- "height"
- I added the start and end locations and removed other parameters. AHeneen (talk) 07:30, 23 June 2016 (UTC)
Lead
[edit]- Please like "France" to its respective article
- Rest is great! :)
- "France" was linked when I created this article, the link was removed by another editor. I re-added the links. AHeneen (talk) 07:30, 23 June 2016 (UTC)
Background
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[edit]- "The Saverne Tunnel was constructed as part of the second phase of the LGV Est européenne (often shortened to LGV Est)." --> No source
- "When completed, the line will connect Paris and Strasbourg—the principal city of the Alsace region and home to several European institutions, including the Council of Europe." --> No source
- "The first phase across 300 kilometres (190 mi) of relatively flat land from Vaires-sur-Marne (near Paris) to Baudrecourt (near Metz and Nancy) opened in 2007." --> No source
- I added sources. AHeneen (talk) 07:30, 23 June 2016 (UTC)
Paragraph 2
[edit]- All good!
Construction
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[edit]- Shouldn't the second appearance of "Lot 47" be italicized?
- And in all cases, since its first appearance is italicized?
- "The Saverne Tunnel was built by Spie Batignolles and Dodin Campenon-Bernard.[4][6] According to RFF, the total cost of the tunnel was approximately €200 million.[5]" --> "The Saverne Tunnel was built by Spie Batignolles and Dodin Campenon-Bernard,[4][6] and according to RFF, costed approximately €200 million.[5]"
- I removed the italics, because it is not a name that should be italicized per MOS:ITALICS. I changed the sentences to "The Saverne Tunnel was built by Spie Batignolles and Dodin Campenon-Bernard,[4][6] at a cost of approximately €200 million.[5]" AHeneen (talk) 07:30, 23 June 2016 (UTC)
Paragraph 2
[edit]- Please insert a comma in between "(TBM)" and "manufactured by..."
- Done. AHeneen (talk) 07:30, 23 June 2016 (UTC)
Paragraph 4
[edit]- "but has been delayed until 3 July 2016 due to an a fatal accident elsewhere on the new line during testing of the LGV Est.[1]" --> "but has been delayed until 3 July 2016 due to a fatal accident elsewhere on the new line during testing of the LGV Est.[1]"
- It is now "Service on the LGV Est line was originally scheduled to begin on 3 April 2016;[19] however, a fatal accident that occurred elsewhere on the new line in November 2015 during commissioning tests has delayed the scheduled opening of the line until 3 July 2016.[2]" AHeneen (talk) 07:30, 23 June 2016 (UTC)
Characteristics
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[edit]- "It is located within three communes—Eckartswiller, Saint-Jean-Saverne, Ernolsheim-lès-Saverne—of the department of Bas-Rhin and is close to the border with the department of Moselle.[18]" --> "It is located within three communes of the department of Bas-Rhin: Eckartswiller, Saint-Jean-Saverne, Ernolsheim-lès-Saverne; it's also close to the border with the department of Moselle.[18]"
- Rest is great! Fantastic work!
- It is now: "It is located close to the border with the department of Moselle and within three communes of the department of Bas-Rhin: Eckartswiller, Saint-Jean-Saverne, Ernolsheim-lès-Saverne." AHeneen (talk) 07:30, 23 June 2016 (UTC)
End of GA Review:
[edit]Nothing majorly wrong here indeed! Great work and will be on hold for seven days to allow for changes. @PING me here with any questions, comments, or concerns. Thank you so much and good luck! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 02:48, 22 June 2016 (UTC).
- @Carbrera: I think that I addressed all the issues and the article is ready to be promoted to GA status. AHeneen (talk) 07:30, 23 June 2016 (UTC)
- @AHeneen: You are correct! Thank you for your swift responses and cooperation, it is very much appreciated! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 12:47, 23 June 2016 (UTC).
- @Carbrera: I have been very busy the last two weeks and have not logged into Wikipedia since before you promoted the article to GA, so a late thanks for the review and promotion! AHeneen (talk) 07:22, 26 June 2016 (UTC)
- @AHeneen: You are correct! Thank you for your swift responses and cooperation, it is very much appreciated! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 12:47, 23 June 2016 (UTC).
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