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Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 17:35, 7 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Created by Maury Markowitz (talk). Self-nominated at 17:28, 14 November 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Sasuke vs. Commander; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited: Yes
  • Interesting: No - It would perhaps be more interesting to introduce it as "one of the first videogames with boss fights"?
QPQ: Done.

Overall: @Maury Markowitz: it looks good, but I am not convinced by the structure of the hook. One would expect but to introduce a contrasting clause, but in this case I don't see how it is contrasting with the first statement. It would perhaps more interesting to introduce it as "one of the first videogames with boss fights"? Broc (talk) 13:30, 29 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Broc: I agree, that is a better hook, so...