Wikipedia:Peer review/The Sims 4/archive2
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I've listed this article for peer review because I am interested in working on an FAC attempt for this. I took this article to GA status in Nov 2022, which involved basically rewriting the entire article, so I can handle any changes/edits from minor to major.
Thanks, Theknine2 (talk) 21:40, 7 July 2024 (UTC)
- Brief comment: The lacking features subsection in development belongs to Reception, comment on fan expectations here and not development plans. IgelRM (talk) 20:52, 27 July 2024 (UTC)
- Also "omit" is probably not neutral here, as games in a series don't automatically have the same features. IgelRM (talk) 08:12, 7 August 2024 (UTC)
- Would "missing" be suitable instead of "omitted"? Theknine2 (talk) 07:44, 12 August 2024 (UTC)
- Also "omit" is probably not neutral here, as games in a series don't automatically have the same features. IgelRM (talk) 08:12, 7 August 2024 (UTC)
I have added this article to the FAC PR sidebar. Please consider reviewing articles listed there. Z1720 (talk) 22:41, 18 July 2024 (UTC)
Comments from BP!
[edit]Hi there! I'll try what I can to bring up all of the article's possible issues. At first glance, there are still some issues with citations. (Also, can you review my FAC if you're able to? =) )
- You need to link all the publications/websites that has article
- You need to add mission authors from other citations that are missing
- Pls write GamesRadar consistently.
- Remove ScreenRant and TheGamer sources since they are low quality
- Remove ABC news, such a poor quality upon checking it.
- Why is The Independent written like "Indy100"?
- Citation 21, Engadget isn't italicized
- I feel like the reception needs to be expanded. This is just my thought.
- The usage of CNET is quite concerning. FAC reviewers hate that source since it's not a good quality source for most people, unfortunately. So omitting causes a lot of work (but it is required).
This is just a partial review. I really think this article needs a lot of work and I'm also aware that this is very hard to do. Best of luck! 🍕Boneless Pizza!🍕 (🔔) 12:17, 25 July 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you! Will work on the citations as best as I can, going through all of them does require a lot of effort. Will also try to work on the "Reception" section where possible, reviews at the time of the game's launch address the same few issues (that are already listed), and later reviews of the game (post-2014) are about the DLC packs rather than the base game. Theknine2 (talk) 09:17, 31 July 2024 (UTC)