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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 23:32, 26 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]


I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:32, 26 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

  • No DABs.
  • Images appropriately licensed.
  • Suggest that metric conversions be given in feet and inches rather than decimal.
    • A good idea
  • Link boilers, troop transports, magazine.
    • Done
  • sixteen 48-pounder muzzle-loading guns I assume smoothbores?
    • Probably, but I don't know for sure - Erzherzog Ferdinand Max was to have been equipped with rifled guns, and she was ordered only a couple years after Juan de Austria.
  • 12-pounder gun and a six-pounder The ship's hull Missing a period, I suspect. Do you know if these are smoothbores or rifled?
    • No, unfortunately.
  • Was the entire ship's side covered by armor? If so, say so.
    • Clarified
  • On 16 July, Persano took the Italian fleet, with twelve ironclads, out of Ancona, bound for the island of Lissa, where they arrived on the 18th. <Perry Mason voice>Objection, your honor, repetitious</voice>
    • Ha - wonder how I ended up doing that.
  • the 17 and 19 July extra word, I assume.
    • Fixed
  • his flagship, Re d'Italia to comma after the name.
    • Good catch
  • The latter scored three hit on missing letter on hit
    • Fixed
  • 7-inch (178 mm) muzzleloaders hyphenate muzzleloaders