Talk:SMS Brummer (1884)/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 11:34, 23 November 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Gog the Mild (talk · contribs) 16:57, 24 November 2024 (UTC)

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Comments

• "After a lengthy period in reserve, she joined the gunnery training school". 1. Is it known when this happened? 2, Could it be mentioned in the main article.
  • Clarified in both places - this was in 1892
• The division leader image needs a US PD tag.
  • Added
• Any chance you could email me a copy of Hildebrande et al Vol 2 page 147? Thanks.
  • No problem at all.
    • Except I don't think I have your email! If you email me, I'll send it over. Parsecboy (talk) 19:55, 24 November 2024 (UTC)

Sent. Gog the Mild (talk) 16:04, 25 November 2024 (UTC)

You should have it, let me know if it didn't go. Parsecboy (talk) 16:13, 25 November 2024 (UTC)

• "a platform was built was installed aft"?
  • Whoops!

Checks

• Passes Earwig.
• Sources look solid to me.
• Images are appropriately tagged.
• My German is rubbish, but several spot checks came up positive.

Gog the Mild (talk) 16:57, 24 November 2024 (UTC)

Great stuff. That was easy. A nice little article. Gog the Mild (talk) 16:51, 25 November 2024 (UTC)