Talk:Robert Simmon

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First, what does the article do well? Is there anything from your review that impressed you? Any turn of phrase that described the subject in a clear way?

I liked that you went into depth about one of Simmon's big achievements (Blue Marble). I thought you did a really great job explaining this concept. In your intro paragraph on Robert Simmon's, you include a lot of detail, which was also really nice.

What changes would you suggest the author apply to the article? Why would those changes be an improvement?

I think maybe split up and add more sections to include his Education, Career, and Publications, in order to give a better understanding of who Robert Simmon's was and to organize your information better.

What’s the most important thing the author could do to improve the article?

Adding more headlines to organize the content that you provide.

Did you notice anything about the article you reviewed that could be applicable to your own article? Let them know!

I really like how you bolded something important that Simmon's contributed to and that you went into depth on this subject. I think that's something I need to add into my Wikipedia site that would make it more interesting.

Feedback from New Page Review process

I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Great job!.

Sam-2727 (talk) 21:50, 16 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]