Talk:Rattlesnake Fire (2018)

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Review: January 20, 2023. (Reviewed version).

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On 14 June 2021, it was proposed that this article be moved to 2018 Rattlesnake Fire. The result of the discussion was not moved.

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GA Review

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

This review is transcluded from Talk:Rattlesnake Fire (2018)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 02:04, 20 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

That should be all; short but sweet! Please ping me once you have addressed my concerns so that I can know when to reevaluate. Thanks, 𓃦LunaEatsTuna (💬) 02:49, 20 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@LunaEatsTuna: All done. –♠Vamí _IV†♠ 04:50, 20 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Nice work! I am now happy to pass this article for GA status. Congrats! 𓃦LunaEatsTuna (💬) 05:49, 20 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Copyvio check

Earwig says good to go.

Files

File:2018 04 13-18.24.10.381-CDT.jpg: relevant, high quality and copyright free—valid public domain rationale.

Prose

"Around 1:30 PM (Mountain Time)" – standard time or DST?

MST; Arizona does not observe daylight savings time. –♠Vamí _IV†♠ 04:49, 20 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

"The fire expanded onto the San Carlos Indian Reservation" – should it not be into?

Probably not, but I've made this changed for consistency. –♠Vamí _IV†♠ 04:49, 20 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

"progress on April 22 thanks to improved weather" – change to "progress on April 22 due to improved weather" or something similar.

Done –♠Vamí _IV†♠ 04:49, 20 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

"which grew over the next day to 21,513 acres (8,706 ha)." – recommend "which grew to over 21,513 acres (8,706 ha) the next day."

Done –♠Vamí _IV†♠ 04:49, 20 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

"No definite cause was determined, however." – recommend "However, no definite cause could be determined."

I have removed the "however" instead. –♠Vamí _IV†♠ 04:49, 20 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Refs

Passes spotcheck—no concerns with refs 3, 6, 8, 14, 16 or 22.

All of the refs have archive URL parameters aside from those from The Arizona Republic; is there a reason for this?

The Arizona Republic has been manually excluded from the Wayback Machine. –♠Vamí _IV†♠ 04:49, 20 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Oh I see! A shame.

Ref 13 is missing a date.

Good catch. Fixed now. –♠Vamí _IV†♠ 04:49, 20 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

For ref 22, I would recommend mentioning the Ecological Restoration Institute.

They're part of Northern Arizona University, so I'll pass on this. –♠Vamí _IV†♠ 04:49, 20 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Noted.

Other

Infobox, coords, nav, cats, WP:ALT text and other templates good.

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