Jump to content

Talk:Polaris (UK nuclear programme)

Page contents not supported in other languages.
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Good articlePolaris (UK nuclear programme) has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Featured topic starPolaris (UK nuclear programme) is part of the Nuclear weapons and the United Kingdom series, a featured topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.
Did You Know Article milestones
DateProcessResult
April 1, 2018Good article nomineeListed
July 15, 2018WikiProject A-class reviewApproved
January 17, 2019Featured article candidateNot promoted
June 26, 2019Good topic candidatePromoted
Did You Know A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on April 27, 2018.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that a series of British nuclear tests was carried out in the United States to develop warheads for the UK Polaris programme?
Current status: Good article

Requested move 13 February 2018

[edit]
The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review. No further edits should be made to this section.

The result of the move request was: consensus to move the page, per the discussion below. Dekimasuよ! 23:45, 19 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]


UK Polaris programme → Polaris (UK nuclear programme) – To match Trident (UK nuclear programme). I don't like this name at all, but I want the two to match. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 05:18, 13 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

The above discussion is preserved as an archive of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on this talk page or in a move review. No further edits should be made to this section.

GA Review

[edit]
GA toolbox
Reviewing
This review is transcluded from Talk:Polaris (UK nuclear programme)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Freikorp (talk · contribs) 00:20, 1 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]


  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    It would be of interest to mention in the lead what exactly is the different between a regular and "hardened" warhead.
    Changed to "hardened against the effects of radiation and nuclear electromagnetic pulse" Hawkeye7 (discuss) 04:02, 1 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    "the UK developed an improved front-end" - can you find a better choice of words than front-end? Would 'nose cone' be appropriate or is that not entirely the same thing?
    Front end is the technical term. Have a look at the picture of the Polaris Missile. You can see Chevaline Penetration Aid Carrier (PAC) behind the Re-entry Vehicle Carrier. (It's on its side.) Hawkeye7 (discuss) 04:02, 1 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    "that Polaris was as yet unproven, that Polaris would be expensive," - I'd simplify to "that Polaris was as yet untested and would be expensive"
    Done. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 04:02, 1 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    I'd introduce the Skybolt to the reader as an 'air-launched ballistic missile'
    Done. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 04:02, 1 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    I note you use the term "AGM-28 Hound Dog", yet "GAM-87 Skybolt" is shortened to 'Skybolt'
    Aargh. These designations are not used in any of the sources. Shortened to "Hound Dog". Hawkeye7 (discuss) 04:02, 1 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    I'd wikilink 'irradiation'
    Done. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 04:02, 1 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    "Chevaline's existence was revealed in January 1980" - can you expand on this? Was it deliberately revealed? If so, why did they suddenly decide to go public?
    The Secretary of State for Defence, Francis Pym, deliberately revealed it in the House of Commons. It was in the context of debate about whether to replace Polaris with Trident. The public announcement enhanced Polaris's deterrent value. It also embarrassed the former Labour government. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 04:02, 1 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    " Adjusting for inflation, the programme cost less than originally envisaged" - adjusted for inflation, what is the cost equivalent to today?
    £240 million in 1972 is worth about £3.37 billion in 2018; £1 billion in 1981 is about £3.87 billion; on Wikipedia we inflate research projects using GDP rather than CPI. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 04:02, 1 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. Has an appropriate reference section:
    B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
    B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail: Outstanding work. Placing on hold until minor issues are addressed. Freikorp (talk) 01:37, 1 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    I'm happy pass this now. Well done. :) Freikorp (talk) 04:08, 1 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

3 questions

[edit]

Hi Hawkeye7, can you pls check these?:

Thanks, JennyOz (talk) 13:15, 27 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

A Commons file used on this page or its Wikidata item has been nominated for deletion

[edit]

The following Wikimedia Commons file used on this page or its Wikidata item has been nominated for deletion:

Participate in the deletion discussion at the nomination page. —Community Tech bot (talk) 11:53, 2 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Retrieved from "https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Talk:Polaris_(UK_nuclear_programme)&oldid=1245361244"