Talk:Paramparça (TV series)

Removed clarification tick

Bulgarian translation is correct so I removed the clarification tick. It is either Your My Life or Your Mine Life but the first one sounds better.

2A00:4802:2A0:0:0:0:0:1AB4 (talk) 00:09, 23 December 2016 (UTC)

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Proposing for unblock "Paramparça" (TV series)

unblock. Improper story in #Synopsis needs edit. Internet Projects (talk) 04:16, 1 May 2018 (UTC)

@Internet Projects: write out your proposed synopsis here and if it is ok then it will be put into the article. Nthep (talk) 08:31, 1 May 2018 (UTC)

Paramparça (TV series)

The lives of two different people intersect an accident. Gülseren (Nurgül Yeşilçay) a beautiful pregnant girl living in a poor neiborhood, is hitted by car and brought to hospital to give birth. Meanwhile, Dilara (Ebru Özkan) gives birth to her baby at the same hospital. Due to their similarity of their last names, the babies are mistakenly given to wrong parents: Gülseren's baby given to Dilara and Dilara's baby given to Gülseren. Fifteen years later, Gülseren lives with her adaptive daughter Hazal and sister-in-law Keriman. She works as saleswoman at store. She has raised her daughter after her husband left her. Meanwhile, Dilara lives with her adaptive daughter Cansu and biological son Ozan in large house in Bosphorus. Although she lives upper class life, her relationship with her husband Cihan (Erkan Petekkaya) is troubled, who is a high-profile rich businessman. When Cihan falls in love with Gülseren, Dilara gets angry and daily nags Cihan. After months, Harun (Barış Falay), Cihan's childhood friend and bussinesman comes to Istanbul, whom wants to retaliate Cihan for his sister's death, though she was died from car accident. Harun firstly falls in love with Dilara as he saw her and Dilara loves him very much. Unknowing Cihan then proposes Gülseren for marriage. In the day Cihan and Gülseren's wedding, she dies at her marriage because she is killed by the ex-husband of Ozan's girlfriend. After death of Gülseren, Cihan feels lonely and his life gets complicated. Dilara pregnant with Harun. Soon he alerts that Harun is adversary to him and warns Dilara to break up. Because of this situation, Cihan marries Dilara again. Then Dilara gives birth to Harun's baby and Cihan reluctantly take care of him. However their love doesn't proceed longer. Dilara still suffers for Harun. Ayşe, well-known psychiatrist and kickboxer trapped in love with Cihan and Cihan loves a lot. Cihan then briefly dates with her. Despite, Cihan discovers her Harun's real cousin. Cihan gets devastated and leaves her until they reunited in case of Ozan's status. Ayşe then accidentally shot and killed by Cihan's father when trying to commit suicide. The story shifts after two years; Cihan leaves Istanbul for vacation, Dilara marries Harun and lives in her house, Hazal and Ozan run a business while Cansu marries Deniz and expect a baby; however Cihan told her that cannot establish new love with Deniz due to Deniz's father issues, who is hostile to Cihan. Meanwhile Cansu caught by long-standing Parkinson's disease, forcing to abort her child.

On the trip, Harun's aunt Maide (Hümeyra), attempt to kill Cihan by detonating in his boat. The explosion directly blames on Harun because they believe that he was accomplice of Maide. When Cihan returned to his family, he realized that an explosion occurred by the scheme of Maide. Dilara repeatedly suspects Harun for his acts. When Dilara and Harun attend a party, Asuman (Mine Tugay) interrupts the ceremony, revealing she is the sister of Dilara. Asuman wants Harun through pressure of Maide. As a result of heavy gunfight, Harun is killed when try to save Ozan from shooting. Harun loves Ozan because of ensures he was biological father. Thus Dilara remarries Cihan and start a new life. The story ends with the two spouses become ultimately united for their children even if they encountered difficulties and ups and down earlier. The title (Broken Pieces) shows these husband and wife always in marriage rather than devotion. Internet Projects (talk) 11:51, 1 May 2018 (UTC)

 Not done @Internet Projects: I'm declining this as it's virtually the same as all the edits which have been removed from this article and why the page is locked from editing. The first part of it is a copy/paste or close paraphrasing of https://www.turkishdrama.com/broken-pieces-paramparca.html and the rest looks like more close paraphrasing from a DVD cover or similar. If someone wants to write a short, neutral synopsis of this series in their own words then fine but copyright violations or close paraphrasing of commercial material will not be accepted. Nthep (talk) 14:34, 1 May 2018 (UTC)

Paramparça (TV series)

Synopsis The lives of two different people from different background intersect each other. Gülseren (Nurgül Yeşilçay), is a young beautiful pregnant woman living in a poor apartment, is hitted by car and brought to hospital to give birth. Meanwhile Dilara (Ebru Ozkan) give birth her own baby at the same hospital. Due to their last name similarity, the babies are mistakenly given to wrong parents: Gülseren's baby to Dilara and Dilara's baby to Gülseren. Fifteen years later, Gülseren lives with her adaptive daughter Hazal and sister-in-law Keriman and Dilara lives with her adaptive daughter Cansu and biological son Ozan. Although she lives upper class life, her relationship with her husband Cihan (Erkan Petekaya) is troubled, who is high profile rich businessman. When Cihan falls in love with Gülseren, Dilara gets angry and daily nags Cihan. After months, Harun (Barış Falay), Cihan's childhood friend and bussinesman comes to Istanbul, whom wants to retaliate Cihan for his sister's death, though she was died from car accident. Harun firstly falls in love with Dilara as he saw her and Dilara loves him very much. Unknowing Cihan then proposes Gülseren for marriage. In the day Cihan and Gülseren's wedding, she dies at her marriage because she is killed by the ex-husband of Ozan's girlfriend. After death of Gülseren, Cihan feels lonely and his life gets complicated. Dilara pregnant with Harun. Soon he alerts that Harun is adversary to him and warns Dilara to break up. Because of this situation, Cihan marries Dilara again. Then Dilara gives birth to Harun's baby and Cihan reluctantly take care of him. However their love doesn't proceed longer. Dilara still suffers for Harun. Ayşe, well-known psychiatrist and kickboxer trapped in love with Cihan and Cihan loves a lot. Cihan then briefly dates with her. Despite, Cihan discovers her Harun's real cousin. Cihan gets devastated and leaves her until they reunited in case of Ozan's status. Ayşe then accidentally shot and killed by Cihan's father when trying to commit suicide. The story shifts after two years; Cihan leaves Istanbul for vacation, Dilara marries Harun and lives in her house, Hazal and Ozan run a business while Cansu marries Deniz and expect a baby; however Cihan told her that cannot establish new love with Deniz due to Deniz's father issues, who is hostile to Cihan. Meanwhile Cansu caught by long-standing Parkinson's disease, forcing to abort her child.

On the trip, Harun's aunt Maide (Hümeyra), attempt to kill Cihan by detonating in his boat. The explosion directly blames on Harun because they believe that he was accomplice of Maide. When Cihan returned to his family, he realized that an explosion occurred by the scheme of Maide. Dilara repeatedly suspects Harun for his acts. When Dilara and Harun attend a party, Asuman (Mine Tugay) interrupts the ceremony, revealing she is the sister of Dilara. Asuman wants Harun through pressure of Maide. As a result of heavy gunfight, Harun is killed when try to save Ozan from shooting. Harun loves Ozan because of ensures he was biological father. Thus Dilara remarries Cihan and start a new life. The story ends with the two spouses become ultimately united for their children even if they encountered difficulties and ups and down earlier. The title (Broken Pieces) shows these husband and wife always in marriage rather than devotion.

Internet Projects talk: This article is done by my own words, There is a change in the first paragraph "background" and "apartment".Other else, I can't do anything in case of the first paragraph because of the paragraph is more understandable and "meaningful" unlike the copyvio. In short, my opinion is to erase the current version on synopsis and replace by this one.

Internet Projects (talk) 16:16, 1 May 2018 (UTC)

Sorry but a synopsis is a summary, nothing detailed. This series could be summed up as little more than "two women from differing backgrounds have babies. Due to a mixup the babies are given to the wrong parents. Years later the fortunes of the two families become intertwined again." It doesn't need every issue in the plots outlining. Nthep (talk) 17:16, 1 May 2018 (UTC)

Paramparça (TV series)

Synopsis The story follows about two different women who interwines each other in accident. Gülseren (Nürgül Yeşilçay) is a pregnant girl living in a poor neiborhood, is hitted by car. She brought to hospital to give birth. Meanwhile Dilara (Ebru Özkan) gives her birth at the same hospital. Due to their similarity their last names, the babies mistakenly given to wrong parents: Gülseren's baby given to Dilara and Dilara's baby given to Gülseren. Fifteen years later, the two lives different lifestyle, Gülseren lives in a poor apartment with her adaptive daughter Hazal and sister-in-law Keriman, and Dilara lives in luxurious villa with her adaptive daughter Cansu and son Ozan. Dilara always gets trouble with her husband Cihan (Erkan Petekkaya), who is a high-profile rich businessman. Cihan falls in love with Gülseren and dates with her. When Cihan's childhood friend Harun (Barıs Falay) comes to Istanbul, he firstly falls in love with Dilara as he saw her and Dilara also loves him very much. He wants to retaliate Cihan for his sister's death and adverse to him. At the time of Cihan and Gülseren's wedding, she is fatally shot by ex-husband of Ozan's girlfriend. After the death of Gülseren, Cihan becomes complicated and Dilara is pregnant with Harun. Cihan obligated to marry her because of rumours about media. But neither Cihan nor Dilara are happy. Dilara suffers for Harun and Cihan encounters Ayşe, a well-known psychiatrist and kickboxer, who meets Cihan accidentally. Unfortunately, she is accidentaly shot and killed by Cihan's father while try to commit suicide. The story shifts after two years with different backgrounds viewpoint: Cihan flees outside Istanbul for vacation; Dilara marries Harun and lives in her house, siblings Hazal and Ozan run a bussiness while Cansu marries Deniz and expect a baby, though Cihan told her that cannot establish new love with Deniz, due to his father issues, who is actively antagonize Cihan. Meanwhile Cansu caught up by long-standing Parkinson's disease, forcing abort her baby. Dilara points Harun in suspicion for his acts.

On the journey, Harun's aunt Maide (Hümeyra), attempts to kill Cihan by detonating in his boat. Maide becomes aggressor to frustrate Cihan when he returned to his family. The explosion directly blames on Harun because they believe that he was accomplice of Maide. Maide, who has asthema complication, soon to be dead. Afterwards, Harun discovers that Ozan is his biological son which causes the strength among the two adversaties. Harun then killed as a result of gunfight when attempt to save Ozan caused by Harun's former cleint Damir. - The synopsis were totally written by my own words and hopes to be suitable for the article. Internet Projects (talk) 18:21, 1 May 2018 (UTC)

It's still way too much and introduces people who aren't relevant. Bearing in mind I've not seen the series this makes very little sense to me. I can get

• two women from differing backgrounds have daughters
• the children are given to the wrong parents
• years later the families paths cross
• the daughters find out they were given to the wrong parents at birth
• they both have unhappy marriages (?)

then I get lost. Keep it simple what happens to the two girls? Affairs? divorce? re-marriage? children? Nthep (talk) 19:09, 1 May 2018 (UTC)

Paramparça (TV series)

Synopsis The story follows about two different women who interwines each other in accident. Gülseren (Nurgül Yeşilçay) is a pregnant girl living in a poor neiborhood, is hitted by car. She brought to hospital to give birth. Meanwhile Dilara (Ebru Özkan) gives her birth at the same hospital. Due to their similarity their last names, the babies mistakenly given to wrong parents: Gülseren's baby given to Dilara and Dilara's baby given to Gülseren. Fifteen years later, the two lives different lifestyle, Gülseren lives in a poor apartment with her adaptive daughter Hazal and sister-in-law Keriman, and Dilara lives in luxurious villa with her adaptive daughter Cansu and son Ozan. Dilara always gets trouble with her husband Cihan (Erkan Petekkaya), who is a high-profile rich businessman. Cihan falls in love with Gülseren and dates with her. When Cihan's childhood friend Harun (Barış Falay) comes to Istanbul, he firstly falls in love with Dilara as he saw her and Dilara also loves him very much. He wants to retaliate Cihan for his sister's death and adverse to him. At the time of Cihan and Gülseren's wedding, she is fatally shot by ex-husband of Ozan's girlfriend. After the death of Gülseren, Cihan becomes complicated and Dilara is pregnant with Harun. Cihan obligated to marry her because of rumours about media. But neither Cihan nor Dilara are happy. Dilara suffers for Harun and Cihan encounters Ayşe, a well-known psychiatrist and kickboxer, who meets Cihan accidentally. Unfortunately, she is accidentaly shot and killed by Cihan's father while try to commit suicide. The story shifts after two years with different backgrounds viewpoint: Cihan flees outside Istanbul for vacation; Dilara marries Harun and lives in her house, siblings Hazal and Ozan run a bussiness while Cansu marries Deniz and expect a baby, though Cihan told her that cannot establish new love with Deniz, due to his father issues, who is actively antagonize Cihan. Meanwhile Cansu caught up by long-standing Parkinson's disease, forcing abort her baby. Dilara points Harun in suspicion for his acts.

On the journey, Harun's aunt Maide (Hümeyra), attempts to kill Cihan by detonating in his boat. Maide becomes aggressor to frustrate Cihan when he returned to his family. The explosion directly blames on Harun because they believe that he was accomplice of Maide. Maide, who has asthema complication, soon to be dead. Afterwards, Harun discovers that Ozan is his biological son which causes the strength among the two adversaties. Harun then killed as a result of gunfight when attempt to save Ozan caused by Harun's former cleint Damir. This opens an opportunity that Dilara become become linked to Cihan. Dilara remarries Cihan and the two mixed children in the earlier possessed by the two spouses.

Internet Projects talk:

I have answered User: Ntep's question as mentioned above, no remaining idea. If Ntep acknowledge this plot idea, I have a request for the linkage of the casts indicated within the brackets "( )" in this synopsis. Internet Projects (talk) 19:54, 2 May 2018 (UTC)

Regardless of the socking and poor English - both of which can be dealt with; I leave this to someone else to respond to as I still think it is too close a paraphrasing of [1] and is a breathless and headline grabbing rush through of all the story lines rather than a concise summary of the series. Nthep (talk) 10:22, 3 May 2018 (UTC)

 Not done: The page's protection level has changed since this request was placed. You should now be able to edit the page yourself. If you still seem to be unable to, please reopen the request with further details. L293D (☎ • ✎) 19:38, 3 May 2018 (UTC)

Semi protect pages request

The Core of SOFTBOX (talk) 15:01, 4 June 2018 (UTC)

 Not done, blank request--Auric talk 14:36, 30 November 2018 (UTC)