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"which has led to the deposition of seafloor massive sulfide deposits that" jargony - perhaps "which has created [[seafloor massive sulfide deposits|sulfide deposits on the seafloor]] that"? Remember the lead should be accessible to as wide a range of readers as possible.
"but still within the eastern sector, lies the summit region:[18] Two flat-topped cones known as "Pjotr's cones",[7] c. 800 m (2,600 ft) and c. 2,500 m (8,200 ft) wide." Are Pjotr's cones in this sector? Why not say "lies the summit region which has ..."?
"low sea level stands" jargon ... I'm left at a loss .. I think it means when the area was above sea level during previous episodes of lower sea levels but...
"devastating tsunamis like the 2018 Sunda Strait tsunami caused by a collapse of Anak Krakatau volcano, which killed 437 people." at most I'd put in "devastating tsunamis like the 2018 Sunda Strait tsunami." but honestly "devastating tsunamis." would also be fine.
I randomly googled three phrases and only turned up Wikipedia mirrors. Earwig's tool shows no sign of copyright violation.
I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow folks to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns, and let me know one of those places when the issues have been addressed. If I may suggest that you strike out, check mark, or otherwise mark the items I've detailed, that will make it possible for me to see what's been addressed, and you can keep track of what's been done and what still needs to be worked on. Ealdgyth (talk) 13:40, 6 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]