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Good articleOne Kiss has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Good topic starOne Kiss is part of the Dua Lipa (album) series, a good topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
September 19, 2020Good article nomineeListed
September 5, 2021Good topic candidatePromoted
Current status: Good article

Requested move 23 April 2018

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The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review. No further edits should be made to this section.

The result of the move request was: no consensus to move the pages to any particular titles at this time, per the discussion below. Dekimasuよ! 03:32, 30 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]



– None of the other topics had the faintest smidge of notability before this article was made.[1] Unreal7 (talk) 19:48, 23 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

We don't use artist names unless other songs have articles. Unreal7 (talk) 21:20, 23 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Sure we do, per WP:DABREDIRECT, its a clearer way of providing a link for users. The Cochran redirect takes the reader to the track listing section of the album that contains it. -- Netoholic @ 21:23, 23 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
No, we do not.[2] Unreal7 (talk) 08:54, 24 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
We need to move to One Kiss (Calvin Harris song) too, since "One Kiss" in GBooks refers to one of Romberg's main songs from The New Moon and New Moon (1930 film). In ictu oculi (talk) 06:46, 24 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
You're the only user on Wikipedia who ever brings up Google Books. It's not relevant. We came to a consensus in 2016 that we don't use artist names if it's the only song with an article. Unreal7 (talk) 08:50, 24 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
But that's wrong. Per the very first line of WP:Disambiguation, all that is required is that another song be "covered" on Wikipedia - even if its only in a section of another article (track listings sections of an album article qualify). -- Netoholic @ 09:37, 24 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Yes I'm the only person at RM who has ever read the second part of the WP:PT guideline. No, obviously not. What's more the issue Unreal7 is that you seem to come to RM frequently with pop songs in the charts without bothering to check in long term sources what else exists. I could be wrong as I'm not keeping a record but offhand I don't recall you ever having done any check before launching this kind of pop song baseline grab. You haven't done one here and you object when someone does. In ictu oculi (talk) 16:47, 25 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Just in case y'all want to move this to a disambiguated namespace, despite no other song with the same title has an article on Wikipedia, what you want is One Kiss (Calvin Harris and Dua Lipa song), not One Kiss (Calvin Harris song), since both are lead artists. Hayman30 (talk) 10:02, 24 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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Genre

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@Karamellpudding1999: Please cite a reliable source for your genre changes. Wikia and Reddit are not reliable because their content is user-generated. Your music teacher is also not a reliable source, no matter how much he knows about hit songs. Please see WP:V and WP:RS for more information.

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I have added some links to support the text about UK chart performance. ---- BrandNew Jim Zhang (talk) 08:54, 26 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Should be added to track list since there are sources that prove it's release [3][4]--2A02:C7D:892B:3D00:4075:EA23:5338:6BA4 (talk) 14:30, 29 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

About the deletion

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@IndianBio: Netherlands chart shouldn't be deleted, it's an important chart.---- BrandNew Jim Zhang (talk) 13:44, 1 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

We have enough Dutch charts. Both the Dutch Top 40 and Single Top 100 are present which are much more extensive charts. —IB [ Poke ] 14:18, 1 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


This review is transcluded from Talk:One Kiss (song)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:23, 15 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]


Good Article review progress box
Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I will start reviewing the article later today, love this track! --K. Peake 07:23, 15 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Can't 2018 be a recording date in the infobox since the body says about this?
  • WP:OVERLINK of Calvin Harris under songwriter(s)
  • "and record producer, Calvin Harris, and" → "and record producer Calvin Harris, and"
  • "Dua Lipa, released for" → "Dua Lipa. The song was released for"
  • "standalone single through" → "standalone single, through" with the appropriate target
  • "also handling the production." → "solely handling the production."
  • ""One Kiss" spans" → "It spans"
  • "genres, while also incorporating UK garage," → "genres, with UK garage,"
  • "It features horns, organs, and a synth-line," → "Horns, organs, and a synth-line are featured within the song,"
  • Target house to House music
  • "and being both's" → "and standing as both's"
  • "It also peaked at number 26" → "It further peaked at number 26"
  • "and is certified triple and" → "and has since been certified triple and"
  • "respectively in the United Kingdom and" → "in the United Kingdom and" since respectively should only be used once in this sentence
  • "and it is certified multi-platinum in 13 countries," → "and has been certified multi-platinum in 13 others,"
  • "The accompanying music video for "One Kiss" was directed" → "An accompanying music video was directed"
  • "premiered exclusively on Apple Music on" → "premiered through Apple Music exclusively on" with the appropriate wikilink
  • "It features Lipa in front a green screen" → "The video features Lipa in front of a green screen" with the target
  • "appears as her waiter." → "appears as the singer's waiter."
  • "Critics praised the visual's aesthetics" → "The visual received praise from critics, who highlighted the aesthetics"
  • "and Spotify vertical video." → "and Spotify-released vertical video."
  • "promoted the single with" → "promoted "One Kiss" with"
  • "including ones on" → "including ones for"

 Done

Background and release

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  • "shortly after Lipa released" → "shortly after Lipa released her single" with the target
  • "Shortly after he contacted" → "Shortly afterwards, he contacted"
  • Remove wikilink on Jamaica
  • "asking if she would like" → "and asked if she would like"
  • "which she agreed to. Lipa" → "which Lipa agreed to. She"
  • "to get a feel for" → "to get a feeling for"
  • "was written by Harris, Lipa and" → "was written by the two and"
  • "although, Harris stated that he" → "although Harris stated that he had"
  • "God's Eyes Studios, in Los Angeles, with" → "God's Eyes Studios in Los Angeles, with him handling"
  • Target mixing to Audio mixing (recorded music)
  • "also by Harris at the same studio, and mastering by" → "as well at the same studio, while the song was mastered by" with the target
  • "to one that features a QR code" → "to one featuring a QR code" with the wikilink
  • "When scanned, it reads" → "When scanned, the code read:"
  • "On 2 April, both artists" → "The following month, both artists"
  • "and release date." → "and the release date."
  • "on 6 April 2018 and" → "on 6 April 2018, and later released as a"
  • "both through" → "with both releases being through"
  • "It was sent to" → "It was also sent to"
  • "The song was included" → "The song was ultimately included"
  • "eponymous debut studio album," → "eponymous debut studio album"
  • "released 19 October 2018" → "released on 19 October 2018"

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Music and lyrics

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  • You should add ref(s) on the audio sample to back up the text
  • Should the brass also be mentioned?
  • ""One Kiss" is a" → "Musically, "One Kiss" is a"
  • "while also incorporating" → "while incorporating"
  • Remove wikilink on instrumental
  • Remove wikilink on piano
  • "which were also categorized as that," → "that were also categorized as such,"
  • "instrumental intro containing" → "instrumental intro, containing"
  • "before Lipa begins singing" → "before Lipa begins to sing"
  • "and tropical house horns," → "alongside tropical house horns,"
  • "which are first heard" → "which are initially heard"
  • "sound as though they have" → "were described as sounding as though they have"
  • Target section to Section (music)
  • "before just Lipa's vocals are heard for the first part of the hook." → "before solely Lipa's vocals are heard on the first part of the chorus."
  • Target should only be to the G note wiki once
  • "using a kiss to trigger" → "mentioning a kiss being used to trigger"

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Remixes

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  • Move this to being the section directly below Live performances
  • "The first remix released was one" → "The first remix was one"
  • "earlier at the" → "earlier at the 2018"
  • "as his sound" → "as reminiscent of his sound"
  • "The final result is a house" → "The remix is a house"
  • "while also featuring bass house" → "while it also features bass house"
  • "an underground basement" → "has an underground basement"
  • No source calls it tech house; maybe just call it a house track?
  • "it includes ominous" → "the remix includes ominous"
  • "He also changed" → "Zhu also changed"
  • "with it being released" → "with his remix being released"
  • "It reimagines the song" → "The remix reimagines "One Kiss""
  • "with Heldens' signature bass sound and organic elements." → "with organic elements and Heldens' signature bass sound."
  • "It adds ghostly horns," → "It also features ghostly horns,"
  • Mention that the contrast of Lipa's voice is on the hook/chorus (whichever you want to call it)
  • "organ synths to the original." → "and organ synths alongside her voice."
  • "on 8 June 2018 and 15 June 2018," → "on 8 June and 15 June 2018,"
  • "The r3hab remix features" → "The R3hab remix features"
  • None of the info from this sentence is backed up by [57]
  • Can you add any info on Khan's remix?
  • Remove target on EP
  • "The stripped down Patrick Topping remix" → "Topping's stripped down remix"
  • "as tech house and" → "as a tech house track and"

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Critical reception

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  • "regarded it as" → "regarded "One Kiss" as"
  • "in 2016"," → "in 2016,""
  • "writing that it" → "writing that the song"
  • "stated it will" → "stated the song is"
  • Dancing Astronaut should not be italicised
  • "Of the same magazine," → "For the same magazine,"
  • "vocals complimenting the song's" → "vocals and complimented the song's"
  • "concluded by writing" → "concluded by admitting that"
  • "as well as labelling the beat" → "while labelling the beat"
  • Target Complex to Complex (magazine) per MOS:LINK2SECT
  • Remove Forbes contributor review per WP:RSP
  • Third para can be merged with the second since it will be of a relatively short length once Forbes has been removed
  • Add the name of the Vice reviewer
  • "despite its inability to" → "despite an inability to"
  • Either remove the brackets release year or add it with [] around
  • The Glamour ranking belongs in the Accolades section instead

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Accolades

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  • This can stay as its own section despite the above being trimmed somewhat, since it is very large on its own
  • The year-end lists should be written out in prose, since five do not warrant a table and add the Glamour ranking to the same para, directly after them in it though
  • A second para should be added to this section, which should be used to summarise some of the main awards and nominations but keep that table, however
  • All columns should be sortable apart from the ref one
  • Category → Award

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Commercial performance

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  • The term "dethroning" is not encyclopedic; try using something else like "replacing", for example
  • ""Nice for What" (2018), becoming" → ""Nice for What" (2018) while becoming"
  • "single following "New Rules" (2017)." → "single, following "New Rules" (2017) for the latter artist."
  • "in the top spot, being dethroned by" → "at the top spot, ultimately being succeeded by"
  • "Because of that," → "Due to the eight consecutive weeks,"
  • "both artists longest running" → "both artists' longest running"
  • "of 53 weeks on the chart," → "of 53 weeks on the UK Singles Chart,"
  • "departing it" → "departing the chart"
  • "from the" → "by the"
  • "for selling 1.8 million track-equivalent units." → "for selling 1.8 million track-equivalent units in the UK."
  • "reached the summit of charts" → "topped the charts"
  • "to eventually peak at" → "going on to peak at"
  • "its eight week, keeping that position" → "its eighth week, remaining at the position"
  • "It was certified 5x platinum" → "The song was certified quintuple platinum by the Australian Recording Industry Association (ARIA)"
  • "350,000 track-equivalent unit sales in the country." → "sales of 350,000 track-equivalent units in the country."
  • "number 6" → "number six"
  • New Zealand and Canada should be swapped in their sentence, since Oceania comes before North America in this order as the third para is the US
  • Mention that the New Zealand position was on the NZ Singles Chart with the target
  • Identify Canada's chart as the Canadian Hot 100 and wikilink
  • "In the United States, "One Kiss" debuted" → "In the US, "One Kiss" debuted"
  • "to a peak of 26," → "to a peak of number 26,"
  • "On American radio charts," → "On US radio charts," with the target, since America is two entire continents not just the US
  • "and 32 respectively on the Adult Top 40, Mainstream Top 40, Rhythmic charts," → "and 32 on the Adult Top 40, Mainstream Top 40, Rhythmic charts," since "respectively" is only needed once in this sentence
  • "It additionally topped the" → "The song additionally topped the US"
  • "and reached number 2 on the" → "and reached number two on"
  • "for track-equivalent sales of 2 million units." → "for sales of 2,000,000 certified units in the US."

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Music video

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Release

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  • Retitle to Background
  • "and a Spotify vertical video." → "and a vertical video, the latter of which was released via Spotify."
  • "playing two couples" → "which plays two couples"
  • "premiered exclusively on" → "premiered exclusively through"
  • "and then on" → "later being released to"
  • Write out here who the video was directed by since this is known; also, is there any background info such as how the director became involved with Harris?

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Synopsis

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  • Img looks good
  • "standing a blue robe" → "standing in a blue robe"
  • Target green screen to Chroma key
  • "seen swaying behind her" → "seen swaying in the background"
  • "wearing teal sequin tops" → "while wearing teal sequin tops"
  • "She is then seen dancing" → "Lipa then dances"
  • "as a sun rises" → "as the Sun rises" since there is only one Sun in the sky
  • "In the next scenes," → "In the following scenes,"
  • "on a fluffy white rug and sits" → "when lying on a fluffy white rug and also sits"
  • "lounge chair, wearing" → "lounge chair and wearing"
  • "and sunglasses, watching" → "and sunglasses as she watches"
  • "sits on the diving board," → "sits on the board,"
  • Target martini to Martini (cocktail)
  • "which she later takes an" → "which Lipa goes on to take an"
  • "which he shuts off." → "who shuts it off."

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Reception

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  • "while summarizing it writing that it" → "while summarizing by writing that it"
  • "Of the same magazine, Hannah Mylrea named it" → "In the same magazine, Hannah Mylrea named the video"
  • "by writing it is" → "by writing that the music video is"
  • Wikilink Instagram on this first mention
  • "praised the puppets, writing they" → "praised the puppets in the video, writing that they"
  • Target Missguided.co.uk to Missguided
  • Remove wikilink on Instagram
  • The awards and nominations should be written out in prose, since four do not warrant a table

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Credits and personnel

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  • Any specific order here?

Live performances

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  • "first time on" → "first time during an episode of"
  • "She wore she wore" → "For the performance, she wore"
  • "with matching-colored tights" → "with matching-coloured tights from"
  • "opening ceremony preceding the" → "opening ceremony that preceded the"
  • "on 26 May in" → "on 26 May of that year in"
  • Target Kiev to Kyiv
  • "of Lipa's Self-Titled tour (2017–2018)." → "of The Self-Titled Tour (2017–2018) by Lipa."
  • "Lipa performed the song as a mash-up with St. Vincent who performed "Masseduction" (2018) at the 61st Annual Grammy Awards." → "Lipa performed the song as a mash-up with St. Vincent at the 61st Annual Grammy Awards, who performed his single "Masseduction" (2018)."
  • "medley with Sam Smith performing "Promises" (2018) and" → "medley that saw Sam Smith perform "Promises" (2018), and"
  • "on 20 February 2019." → "on 20 February."

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Track listings

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  • Under the track listings (not the titles of them), shouldn't capitalisation be applied to words like Remix where it is present under the citations?
  • The first remixes release should not be identified as an EP, only the second should
  • Remove target on 12-inch vinyl

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Credits and personnel

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  • The sub-sections are pointless; split the three different types of info by using sub-headings instead
  • Wikilink Los Angeles
  • Wikilink Devon
  • Target Warner Bros Records to Warner Records
  • Is Universal Music GmbH a typo or not?

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Charts

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Weekly charts

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  • Should both of the Columbia charts be included or only one?
  • Target HRT to Hrvatska radiotelevizija
  • Remove the Czech Republic and Slovakia radio charts
  • Greece (IFPI Greece) → Greece International Digital Singles (IFPI)
  • Israel peak is not displayed by the citation... or is there something to press that I missed?

 Done

Year-end charts

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  • Wikilink Galgalatz
  • Poland (ZPAV) → Poland (Polish Airplay Top 100)

 Done

Decade-end charts

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  • Good

Certifications

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  • Good

Release history

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  • Label → Label(s)
  • The releases named as various need to have multiple citations to verify that claim
  •  Not done. For services like Beatport and Tidal, when one goes onto their website, they don't have a specific country/territory defined. You can also see with the link of the iTunes ones that no territory is defined as this is from iTunes 2018. So therefore it is kind of universal. Even if it wasn't I couldn't have multiple citations as all have been removed from all platforms after the remix EP release. There was one Apple Music one that I have done though. LOVI33 13:33, 19 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Wikilink Jauz
  • Wikilink Zhu
  • Wikilink Oliver Heldens
  • Wikilink R3hab
  • Wikilink Valentino Khan
  • Remixes and Remixes EP should be in two separate rows for the versions; identify the first as Remixes and the second as Remixes EP sine only one is an EP

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See also

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  • Good

References

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  • Cite Much as publisher instead for ref 34
  • Cite Dancing Astronaut as publisher instead for refs 36, 59, 65, 71 and 75
  • Cite Your EDM as publisher instead for refs 40 and 56
  • Ref 41's title is not formatted correctly; there is a missing space between Calvin and Harris
  • Hot New Hip HopHotNewHipHop on ref 46
  • Are you sure ref 50 doesn't violate WP:RSSM?
  • Remove or replace ref 51 per WP:RSSM
  • Refs 55, 60, 63, 67, 68, 153, 154, 155 and 156 should cite in the same format as ref 15
  • Target DJ Magazine to DJ Mag on ref 72
  • MTV UK → MTV on ref 73
  • WP:OVERLINK of BBC on ref 84
  • Cite Gulf News as work/website instead for ref 88
  • MOS:QWQ issues with ref 92
  • WP:OVERLINK of Popjustice on ref 94
  • WP:OVERLINK of Sony Music on ref 99
  • Target HRT to Hrvatska radiotelevizija on ref 108 and fix MOS:CAPS issues
  • Remove Greece from the title of ref 112 and cite IFPI Greece as publisher with the wikilink
  • Media Forest Israel → Media Forest on ref 115 with the wikilink, and if there isn't any way to access the peak that you know which I haven't found yet then remove or replace this; just hoping there is an explanation though
  • The official lebanese Top 20The Official Lebanese Top 20 (as publisher instead) on ref 117 with the wikilink
  • Remove SloTop50 from the title of ref 125 and cite as the publisher, with the wikilink
  • Cite United Press International as publisher instead for ref 139
  • WP:OVERLINK of Australian Recording Industry Association on ref 159
  • WP:OVERLINK of National-Report on refs 166 and 198
  • Fix the accessdate of ref 168
  • MOS:CAPS issues with ref 171's publisher
  • WP:OVERLINK of Billboard on refs 173 and 181
  • WP:OVERLINK of Monitor Latino on refs 183 and 188
  • Wikilink Recording Industry Association (Singapore) on ref 190
  • Target Gaon Chart to Gaon Music Chart on ref 192
  • Remove Monitor Latino from the title of ref 199 and fix WP:OVERLINK
  • Remove PROPHON from the title of ref 204
  • Cite GfK Entertainment as publisher instead for ref 210 and target to GfK Entertainment charts
  • Target Mahasz to Association of Hungarian Record Companies on ref 211
  • WP:OVERLINK of Mahasz on refs 212, 213, 214 and 236
  • WP:OVERLINK of Kiss FM on ref 223 and delete the trans title since that is not used anywhere else in this article
  • WP:OVERLINK of Tophit on refs 224 and 229
  • Remove SloTop50 from the title of ref 225 and fix WP:OVERLINK
  • Target PROMUSICAE to Productores de Música de España on ref 226
  • MOS:CAPS issues with ref 241
  • Fix the title of ref 252
  • promusicae.es → PROMUSICAE on ref 253
  • Remove Hung Medien from ref 254

 Done

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  • Live on The Graham Norton Show → "One Kiss" (Live on The Graham Norton Show)

 Done

Final comments and verdict

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  •  On hold after a long review, this article is very large but you have some good writing skills. If you are confused about any of the changes that I requested or have reasons they should not be implemented, do not feel free to reach out! --K. Peake 14:16, 17 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

Requested move 5 October 2023

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The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review after discussing it on the closer's talk page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

The result of the move request was: moved. (closed by non-admin page mover) Frostly (talk) 03:21, 21 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]


– It's now clearer that this is the primary topic. The song receives 95% of the pageviews (usage) and has multi-platinum certifications in many countries (pointing toward significance). (Pinging users from previous move discussion: @Unreal7, Netoholic, In ictu oculi, Hayman30, and Dekimasu.) Hameltion (talk | contribs) 04:53, 5 October 2023 (UTC) — Relisting. ModernDayTrilobite (talkcontribs) 15:05, 13 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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