Talk:Obviously 5 Believers/GA1
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Reviewer: Ippantekina (talk · contribs) 07:45, 6 March 2023 (UTC)
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a. (reference section):
- b. (citations to reliable sources):
- c. (OR):
- d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a. (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a. (major aspects):
- b. (focused):
- a. (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
- b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/fail:
- Pass/fail:
(Criteria marked are unassessed)
Lead and infobox
[edit]- "9–10 March 1966 session" switch to MDY for consistency with American English
- "It has been interpreted as a blues song about loneliness" any reason why blues was left out of
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in the infobox? - "as one of the minor songs" "minor songs" might mean "unmemorable", "insignificant"...?
- "In 2010 the song was included" comma after year
Background and recording
[edit]- "early morning hours of the 9–10 March 1966 Nashville session" ditto. Also add a comma after the date per MOS:COMMA
- "Sean Wilentz feels that the song is driven by..." who is Sean Wilentz?
- "and that he didn't want to spend much time on it" → "did not" for a more encyclopedic tone
- "In 2010 it was included" ditto
Composition
[edit]- "Philippe Margotin and Jean-Michel Guesdon" who are they? Critics? Biographers of Dylan? etc.
- "The song is similar in melody and structure to Memphis Minnie's "Chauffeur Blues" " might need some attribution
- The caption of the audio file could be moved to the prose. Keep the caption succinct.
Critical reception
[edit]- Some quotes can be paraphrased to avoid a quote farm. I.e. "one of Dylan's most assured, commanding vocals", "the best R&B song on the album"
Other
[edit]- Refs are reliable and properly formatted
- Images and files are properly licensed
Verdict
[edit]On hold for seven days. Mostly nitpick-y prose issues but overall a solid article. Ippantekina (talk) 04:11, 13 March 2023 (UTC)
- Many thanks, [[User:Ippantekina]|Ippantekina]]]. I've amended the article to address all of your comments. Let me know if anything else is required. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 11:06, 13 March 2023 (UTC)
- All should be good now BennyOnTheLoose except one last thing. I prefer the lead not having any inline citations (MOS:LEADCITE), so could you paraphrase the "filler" and "makeweight" comments in the lead and remove the citations? Ippantekina (talk) 02:49, 14 March 2023 (UTC)
- Does "insubstantial" work, Ippantekina? Thanks, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 10:10, 14 March 2023 (UTC)
- That should work! Passing, well done :) Ippantekina (talk) 02:47, 15 March 2023 (UTC)
- Does "insubstantial" work, Ippantekina? Thanks, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 10:10, 14 March 2023 (UTC)
- All should be good now BennyOnTheLoose except one last thing. I prefer the lead not having any inline citations (MOS:LEADCITE), so could you paraphrase the "filler" and "makeweight" comments in the lead and remove the citations? Ippantekina (talk) 02:49, 14 March 2023 (UTC)
- Many thanks, [[User:Ippantekina]|Ippantekina]]]. I've amended the article to address all of your comments. Let me know if anything else is required. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 11:06, 13 March 2023 (UTC)