Talk:OMG (NewJeans song)/GA1
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Reviewer: Nkon21 (talk · contribs) 20:46, 20 February 2024 (UTC)
Hi, I will be reviewing this GAN! I broke the replay button for this song the entirety of last year...
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[edit]is a song by the South Korean idol girl group
Not sure if "the" or "idol" is needed to be honest, as 99% of other K-pop articles don't use them
- I took advice from WP:FALSETITLE. Of course not all articles should use them, but I believe it's proper English. Ippantekina (talk) 02:40, 21 February 2024 (UTC)
from their single album of the same name
→ from their single album of the same name (2023)
Done
pointing out that they're filming a music video
→ pointing out that they are filming a music video, per MOS:CONTRACTIONS
Done
"OMG" has lyrics in Korean and English
→ "OMG" contains lyrics in Korean and English
Done
- Change the website parameter to publisher on ref 7
Done
- Change the author in ref 9 to Rhian Daly
Done
- Wrap the apostrophe in Pitchfork's in the "Music and lyrics" section with {{ }}
- Replace the website on ref 36 with "Fan N Star"
Done
- Replace the publisher on ref 37 with website
Done
- Ref for "January 26, 2023" under music program awards is missing
Not done The Soompi ref needs to be replaced per WP:KO/RS#UR
- Removed due to lack of reliable sources available. Ippantekina (talk) 03:02, 26 February 2024 (UTC)
- Add via=Naver to ref 2
Done
- Ref 26 redirects back to the Circle Chart homepage; add trans-title and rename "publisher" as Circle Chart
Done
- Write out RIAS as Recording Industry Association Singapore on ref 29
Done
- Same thing for ref 50
Done
- Add trans-title and author to ref 39
- Add author to ref 42
Billboard Global 200 – Year-End 2023
→ Billboard Global 200 – 2023 on ref 58
Done
Billboard Japan Hot 100 – 2023 Year-End
→ Billboard Japan Hot 100 – 2023 on ref 59
Done
Digital Chart 2023
→ Digital Chart – 2023 on ref 60
Done
- All refs should have consistent formatting, so add or substitute publisher=Naver to via=Naver to all refs where it applies (or vice versa)
- I would suggest adding a promotion and live performances section, as many of them are already listed at List of NewJeans live performances
- All sources should be archived too
- My IArchivebot has been plagued with errors for some time now. Could you assist me with this? Ippantekina (talk) 04:20, 21 February 2024 (UTC)
- Done with the help of another user. Ippantekina (talk) 03:59, 23 February 2024 (UTC)
This is overall a very well-written article so I don't have many comments regarding the prose, just some formatting tweaks and several others. Great work! ɴᴋᴏɴ21 ❯❯❯ talk 22:25, 20 February 2024 (UTC)
- All should be done now. Thanks for the review :) Ippantekina (talk) 05:56, 23 February 2024 (UTC)
- Passing now since all my concerns have been addressed. Good job! ɴᴋᴏɴ21 ❯❯❯ talk 04:03, 26 February 2024 (UTC)
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