Talk:No Sleep (LaViVe album)

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Review: March 30, 2018. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Freikorp (talk · contribs) 05:55, 30 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Is it reasonably well written?
"noting that the songs sounded like demo versions" - replace noted with 'said' or 'stated' as per WP:WORDS.
Done Cartoon network freak (talk) 10:00, 30 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

"and picked "I Swear" as the highlight on No Sleep" - I's change this to "... highlight on the album".
Done Cartoon network freak (talk) 10:00, 30 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

"negatively commented that the record was produced in a considerably short amount of time" - did he mention how the short recording negatively impacted on the album's production? Simply producing an album in a short time would be considered a positive. This needs context if it's available.
Done Yes, there is context on this, and it is how the short time for recording negatively impacted on the album's production. I tried to reword the sentence... Cartoon network freak (talk) 10:00, 30 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. Has an appropriate reference section:

B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:

C. No original research:
Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects:
I've always found you very thorough in your articles, but I still have to at least ask, are you sure there isn't any information out there on the album's promotion? And how about tours/live performances?
There was no specific promotion for the album (or at least I couldn't find anything about that). LaViVe did have a tour for their single "No Time for Sleeping", but that is not promotion for the album itself. Also, the band disbanded soon after the album's release, which further speaks against a possible tour or concerts meant to aid the album. Cartoon network freak (talk) 10:00, 30 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

B. Focused:
Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias:
Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc:
Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:

B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail: Lookin' good. Placing on hold. Freikorp (talk) 06:12, 30 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Freikorp: Thank you very much for your review! I believe I have answered to all your queries raised above. Best regards; Cartoon network freak (talk) 10:00, 30 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Excellent, outstanding work, happy to pass this now. :) Freikorp (talk) 10:12, 30 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]