Talk:New York Produce Exchange/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:31, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:31, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• Add alt text to every image being used.
• Remove the comma after "on the block".
• "at a cost of" → "for" (less wordy)
• "At the end of the end of" → "At the end of"
• "During 1880" → "In 1880"
• Remove the hyphen between "new-building".
• Remove the hyphen between "animal-heads".
• Remove the comma after "stairways were placed".
• Add a hyphen between "stained glass".
• "separately of each" - shouldn't "of" be "from"?
• Remove the comma after "other respects".
• "Salad Oil scandal" → "salad oil scandal" (see article)
• Wikilink The New York Times, Meyer Berger, and Edith Evans Asbury.

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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@Some Dude From North Carolina: Thanks. I have resolved these issues now. Epicgenius (talk) 00:50, 10 July 2021 (UTC)