Talk:New York Produce Exchange
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Images of interior
[edit]By comparison with King, the stereograph seems misdated. They are the same interior; namely, the second exchange. Vzeebjtf (talk) 08:46, 6 March 2021 (UTC)
Did you know nomination
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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 06:33, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
- ... that the New York Produce Exchange's headquarters was the world's first building with a superstructure combining wrought iron and masonry? Source: Stern, Robert A. M.; Gilmartin, Gregory; Massengale, John Montague (1983). New York 1900: Metropolitan Architecture and Urbanism, 1890-1915. New York: Rizzoli. p. 146
- ALT1:... that the New York Produce Exchange, once one of New York City's busiest exchanges, later dissolved into a real estate investment trust? Source: (1) "The New York Produce Exchange.; Wide Scope of Its Operations and History of Its Growth". The New York Times. September 22, 1901. p. 21 (2) "Produce Exchange Dissolved Into Realty Business Trust". Wall Street Journal. May 29, 1973. p. 31.
- ALT2:... that the New York Produce Exchange's business was described in 1886, as "callithumpian discord" with "fiendish screeches"? Source: Gray, Christopher (August 21, 2014). "A Brick Beauty Bites the Dust". The New York Times.
- ALTBP1:... that the New York Produce Exchange, converted into a realty trust, sold off 2 Broadway following a dispute over the cost of a land lease? Source: Metz, Robert (December 14, 1983). "Patience is a virtue that can pay off handsomely". New York Daily News. p. 106. Note: This alt can only be used if it's approved simultaneously with the same hook at Template:Did you know nominations/2 Broadway.
- ALTBP2:... that the New York Produce Exchange agreed to demolish its old headquarters in exchange for ownership of land under 2 Broadway, a new skyscraper being built at the same site? Source: "Produce Exchange's Building To Be Razed". New York Herald Tribune. May 8, 1956. p. 18. Note: This alt can only be used if it's approved simultaneously with the same hook at Template:Did you know nominations/2 Broadway.
- Reviewed: KQLO
- Comment: See the note for the ALTBP hooks. There are two hooks at Template:Did you know nominations/2 Broadway (already approved) which are exactly the same, and must be approved simultaneously.
5x expanded by Epicgenius (talk). Self-nominated at 18:14, 6 March 2021 (UTC).
- This article is a fivefold expansion and is new enough and long enough. I am approving all the hooks, including the ALTBP hooks, but the promoter will need to be adroit if one of these is used. The hook facts are cited inline, the article is neutral, and I detected no copyright issues. A QPQ has been done. (If the Exchange retained ownership of the land, why did it have to "pay $100,000 in annual rent for the ground lease"?) Cwmhiraeth (talk) 11:49, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
- Cwmhiraeth, thanks for the review. At the time, the building's owner and land owner were different entities. The Exchange retained land ownership but leased the ground floor from the building owner (hence a ground-story lease). I have clarified this now. Epicgenius (talk) 17:31, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
"Site redevelopment" section
[edit]"When the Uris Buildings Corporation subsequently took over the development, the Produce Exchange's land ownership was preserved. … Although the Produce Exchange had to pay $100,000 in annual rent for the ground lease … ." What am I missing? Vzeebjtf (talk) 07:26, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
- Vzeebjtf, I've fixed this now, as mentioned in the DYK nomination. It was a ground-story lease. Epicgenius (talk) 17:36, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
- Excellent. Thank you. Vzeebjtf (talk) 22:35, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:31, 1 July 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:31, 1 July 2021 (UTC)
Comments
[edit]- Add alt text to every image being used.
- Remove the comma after "on the block".
- "at a cost of" → "for" (less wordy)
- "At the end of the end of" → "At the end of"
- "During 1880" → "In 1880"
- Remove the hyphen between "new-building".
- Remove the hyphen between "animal-heads".
- Remove the comma after "stairways were placed".
- Add a hyphen between "stained glass".
- "separately of each" - shouldn't "of" be "from"?
- Remove the comma after "other respects".
- "Salad Oil scandal" → "salad oil scandal" (see article)
- Wikilink The New York Times, Meyer Berger, and Edith Evans Asbury.
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- @Some Dude From North Carolina: Thanks. I have resolved these issues now. Epicgenius (talk) 00:50, 10 July 2021 (UTC)
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