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Reviewer: Bruce1ee (talk · contribs) 13:25, 19 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I'll be reviewing this nomination, and I'll follow up here with my findings over the next couple of days. —Bruce1eetalk 13:25, 19 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks so much. Looking forward to your comments. --Another Believer (Talk) 16:22, 19 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:
    See comments below ...
    B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
    See comments below ...
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. Has an appropriate reference section:
    B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
    See comments below ...
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
    See comments below ...
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
    See comments below ...
    B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:
Comments
  • 4.
    • At first glance it bothered me that the article heaps so much praise on the Oregon Symphony, which could be seen as being biased towards them. But most of this praise is supported by reliable secondary sources, and if there just wasn't any bad press, I guess then the article can't be seen as being biased.

Please have a look at the above issues I've found. Otherwise, it's a nicely written article with a good coverage of the subject. —Bruce1eetalk 14:04, 20 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your time and assistance. I am in the process of addressing your concerns. --Another Believer (Talk) 16:23, 20 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]
I believe I have addressed all of your concerns. Please review my changes and let me know if you have any other comments or concerns. Again, thank you so much. More work on this article remains, but I am so proud of its current state and have several Wikipedians to thank for their assistance, yourself included. --Another Believer (Talk) 16:49, 20 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Everything looks fine now, I've promoted it to GA. Thanks for your fixes and all your hard work on this article. I've enjoyed doing this review and it's been a pleasure working with you. —Bruce1eetalk 06:39, 21 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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