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A fact from Money Shot: The Pornhub Story appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 24 April 2023 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
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Your call. Wiktionary considers it a word. It doesn't seem that uncommon, nor especially recent - [1]. I was unaware that each word in a hook needed to be found in the/a source, indeed I had thought that good paraphrasing was the essence of Wikipedia. Gog the Mild (talk) 14:53, 10 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Gog the Mild: I understood the meaning - so perhaps others will. In our hook we are quoting reviewers of the series and they apparently did not use the word unsalacious, but it describes many reviews. I will leave the word as it is and see if any other editors protest or tweak the hook in the prep or queue. Bruxton (talk) 16:04, 10 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks Bruxton. To my eye we are not stating that they said it was unsalacious, we are saying that they described it as unsalacious. IMO they did. Other opinions are no doubt available. Gog the Mild (talk) 16:19, 10 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
I copy edited the article and left a few tags. Beyond that, the synopsis section needs better organization; it doesn't present as a coherent narrative of the documentary as written. The reception section also feels a bit unorganized; I'm not sure what the logic of the grouping of the reviews is. Topic sentences in each paragraph might help you reorganize better.
It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
I don't see any reviews from right-wing media sources, which I imagine did not take kindly to the films message. Do any exist? What do they have to say?
Is it stable?
It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
Note: Rotten Tomatoes now shows 84% with 31 reviews. Please fix.
Thanks for taking this review, Voorts. I believe this covers all your feedback:
I've updated the Rotten Tomatoes percentage and reworded all material that was tagged.
Inline citations are not required for each sentence, even in the case of direct quotes. Take a look at WP:CITEDENSE. The convention I choose to follow is that (except for synopses) every piece of information is sourced to the next inline citation (or group of incites) that appears.
On the Synopsis, this is a rare case of me agreeing with the reviewers: the documentary is so unstructured and sprawling that it is hard to group descriptive sentences into coherent paragraphs. I've done another copyedit.
On the Reception, I'm reminded of Newton's third law of motion: uniquely among all reception sections I've ever written, it seems that for each reviewer opinion there exists an equal and opposite opinion. I've torn it apart and had another go at restructuring reviewer comments by theme.
I used all the reviews I found from high-quality sources. I've not read it much but I gather that The Globe and Mail is generally socially conservative. I would imagine most right-wing broadsheets chose not to review it. If you've found some reviews not included that are usable, I'm happy to take a look.
On ref 12a, the source recommends ... watching the doc at 1.5 speed and knowing that you won’t miss a single thing. Rewritten in encyclopedic language, this can be phrased as "[the reviewer] suggested that its pace was too slow".
On the "covering skin" idea, the source says: They could have easily made me appear dumb, or like a bitch, so I purposefully covered up my skin. I've rewritten the summary as ... wear clothing that covered her skin .... The point is that she is not wearing 'revealing' clothing (which would code her a 'slut', 'bitch', 'dumb' etc.), but we can't use the judgemental word 'revealing' (etc.) per NPOV.
On I imagine this is misstating what is said in the documentary. It's hard to believe that a major corporation with legal counsel would be unaware of a major US law affecting their business: this is not what the article said. The claim is not all executives were aware of the bill (rather than "all employees were unaware"). I've rephrased more tightly. Note also this source, which I found when searching on this and also incorporated in Production: At one point, as she also recounts in Money Shot, Perdue remembers being in a meeting with the CEO and him not knowing about SESTA/FOSTA, the infamous 2018 legislation intended to curb sex trafficking online that had the effect of endangering sex workers. “I was raging,” she says.Rolling Stone. (We can't say it's a comment about the CEO, because in the documentary it's not so specific.)
On How is this relevant? In what way did he compare Pornhub to The Sopranos?, I've replaced with the specific claim: It's a racketeering case (57:55).
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