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Some vague references

Some points in the article are vague statements without direct references or sources.

+ There was no "Austrian Government" in 1941. Austria was part of Nazi Germany 1938-45. When did Iran Teymourtash visit him? During the war as originally implied or after the war?

+ The Gestapo was founded in 1933. The statement that he modelled Iran's secret police after the Gestapo in the early 1930's is very vague and needs citation, proof or a source.

+ Generally speaking the article needs more sources and evidence. It is too vague in it's present form

84.153.104.208 15:01, 2 March 2007 (UTC)Sallah[reply]