Talk:Mangzhong

Time Low‑importance

	This article is within the scope of WikiProject Time, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of Time on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.TimeWikipedia:WikiProject TimeTemplate:WikiProject TimeTime articles
Low	This article has been rated as Low-importance on the project's importance scale.

China Low‑importance

	China portal This article is within the scope of WikiProject China, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of China related articles on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.ChinaWikipedia:WikiProject ChinaTemplate:WikiProject ChinaChina-related articles
Low	This article has been rated as Low-importance on the project's importance scale.

Restructure and edit

I am a newbie, and this came up as a suggested edit. So I just want to explain my changes in case there are any problems.

I found the flow of the page a bit disjointed, and a few bits repeated themselves. There also wasn't a clear lead section. So I ended up changing the sections around a bit.

I mostly kept the same wording but moved them to different places. But I did reword a the section that became the lead (part of what was already in the lead, and partly from the 'physical phenomena' section.
There were a few bits that I didn't understand the meaning of, so I left them (the 'cognate of Mang chung' part in particular).
I moved the lang-zh template with the Chinese characters up to the top sentence. I wasn't sure if the Japanese and Korean names should go in the same spot. So I left that at the bottom of the lead paragraph.
I moved the 'history and origin' section to the top of the body because that felt like a better start to the body section. I added in a section from the original lead section here, because it seemed related.
I wasn't sure what to do with the 'physical phenomena' section - I largely pillaged this section to add to the lead, so it is now quite small and probably not worth a whole section for itself.

References

I did not add any references, and most of the parts I moved around and reworded were unreferenced.
There was one reference in the lead section, and it was at the beginning of a sentence, that started "The ninth solar term, known as 'REF' Mangzhong..." so I put it at the end of that sentence. BUT I didn't check what the reference said, because my browser warned me about it not being a safe link. What should I do in this situation?

AdaWoolf (talk) 10:20, 23 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]