Talk:Louis Crews/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 23:35, 19 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Added college basketball coaches in the US due to there being no Jarvis coaches cat and added Yale alumni cat.
In the lead should there be a comma after Lewis? Done
- Actually, I don't think noting that there was sometimes misspelling is that important for the lead - I removed that part.
Shouldn't we include the womens basketball championships in the infobox?
- Added.
  - Infobox says when they won the two titles but body doesn't. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 12:57, 25 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]
    - Added.
And the Alcorn and Albama baseball also since the football SIAC is included. Done
- Added.
unlink Southern Intercollegiate Athletic Conference in later life. Its already linked in the body. Done
- Delinked.
What's the Lewis Crews Classic? Done
- Explained.
  - Can we expand a little more and say its the first home game of every season. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 12:57, 25 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]
    - Added.
Where are the Javier records from in the record table? Done
- Jarvis Christian? Here - should I add it in as a ref?
  - There's already a ref at the end of the table so yes add ref 2 also.
    - Added.
Do you think we should say something about all three of those schools being historically black? Idk Done
- Eh, I don't think its needed, but I can add it if you want.

@WikiOriginal-9: BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:56, 25 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- @WikiOriginal-9: BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:18, 26 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]
"the women's basketball team to two championships (1951 and 1952) and the baseball team to a South Central Athletic Conference (SCAC) crown in 1953." Having SCAC on just the baseball part makes it sound like the basketball titles weren't SCAC. Were they? WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 12:11, 26 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- @WikiOriginal-9: I would assume the basketball titles were SCAC, as the men's team at least were in the SCAC and I don't think I've seen an instance were the men were one conference and women the other, so I changed the wording to and led the women's basketball team to two South Central Athletic Conference (SCAC) championships (1951 and 1952) and the baseball team to a SCAC title in 1953 — does that work? BeanieFan11 (talk) 14:30, 26 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

All issues have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 14:30, 26 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]